Each letter has a different sound and taste for me… The first line has two light L – I refuse to admit that the day or the dream is ending, the second line has three heavy R – an intense longing; the fifth line has four light L (hopelessness)
twilight is falling on the river of Desire I’m dreaming in vain… young love never comes to me by a silent lonely lane
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