My Sweet Love

My sweet love for you will never die

can you see the sweet moon light that falls upon the beautiful shore

for you keep telling me more and more thought of passion

can we get lost in your fashion of love

for i love to see all the stars above

worlds apart for so many breaking hearts

for my passion of falling tears

falling leaves all around ,for my heart will pound to you hurtful sounds

we can all love,hate,run,jump,cry,fall, be cold forever more

now we must build the heart of time

this will never be a crime .


                                                 the night walker.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Armitage Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Good & well poem to read! How passion can become not enough! So true & Sweet... keep writing!!! Like this!
Devonshire Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Staying true to your heart is so important in today's world, Duncan, and I can see how deeply things affect you in the beautiful poem. Love, Carolyn
Wilson Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:17 PM
how very sweet -Take care~Deb
Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 4:19 PM
A sweet and passionate write.
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October 17, 2010 at 11:12 AM
a lovely write, very sweet enjoyed,..P.D.
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