My Sweet Family

See my cool family, Pari or Emily. 
Father is the head of the family 
Mother is the tail of it. Like simile 
They work for one another early
Keeping all things together surely.
All children and grandparents lively
Are the bogies of this train Charlie. 
All guests are passengers in hurry
Who come and go without fury. 
Such people are good and chilly
Whom you can find in wood easily. 
Daughters, sons are joy sheer to see.
Mitesh, Kunal and Siddu speak eagerly,
Pallu, Paisa, Deepu and Apu are showy,
All my cousins with Mital and Vaikhari
Punam, Amit and Shau talk truth clearly.
But the Family is never ending journey 
The elders are turning on its cool key. 
I too am a member of such dear Family 
And would invite to join it Sam or Lily;
See my cool family, Pari or Emily.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/22/2018 12:49:00 PM
What a most wonderful tribute to a lovely family! Well done! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 1/2/2018 9:52:00 PM
What a cool family it is!Home is our eternal harbor; home is our never-tired journey; home is a warm and happy poem. Sanket's MY SWEET FAMILY tells us a real and ideal home which has sweetness, unity, harmony, and happiness. The fascinating poem has lively rhythm and rhyme harmony.(Shmily Wang,from China)
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Date: 1/2/2018 7:04:00 PM
Sanket, I admire your courage to explore the depths of family, facing it's pain and joy. well done, I find inspiration from your good use of words.
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Date: 10/17/2017 1:05:00 AM
Well Sanket you do have a lovely sweet family, and how lucky are they to be having you dedicating beautiful poems to them. Keep writing...Maria
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Sanket Jain
Date: 10/18/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thank You for sharing your precious thought and reviews. I am really blessed to have such a good family with my uncles cousin brother sisters mother and father. And Thanks for your inspiring, kind, soft fingers. Your inspiration gives great enthusiasm for Pari
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