My Sweet Divine

Before I go 
My sweet divine
And embark the forbidden hands of time
I shall ask of you one thing 
As I stand before you 
I see you crumble 
Sweet liquid luck 
Runs down your face 
But to you it doesn't seem so lucky 
You beg me to stay 
And scream my name 
And whisper sweet nothings 
Why, oh why 
Do you set my heart on fire 
With words instead of flames
Promise me you'll remember 
The day we first met 
Your hair in a bun
And your smile so sweet 
Like the earth of the Summer beneath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 2, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Diana,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 2, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Diane, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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July 2, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Don't know why it did it twice and excuse the question marks
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July 2, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Don't know why it did it twice and excuse the question marks
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July 2, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Don't know why it did it twice and excuse the question marks
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July 2, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Thank you SKAT ??
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July 2, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Thank you SKAT ??
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