My Swan

I am comtemplating if this is right,
And if words can justify my heart;
But when I see your face by the twilight,
I can say that we'll never be apart.
My falling star that i can wish upon.
The beauty that out weighs all the universe,
Is embedded in this person, my swan.
The one who leaves my life with no remorse.
Rainy days I sit on my door step to think.
Although my mind is full of confusion,
One thing's certain: I can write this with ink.
I will be here without dissolution.
You have become perfect in my bleak eye,
My swan and my angel until I die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Richards Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Lovely and romantic ! Nicely done!~ Carrie
Orozco Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 1:58 AM
amazing piece! good write here_ eddie
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Nice sonnet. Keep writing. Sara
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