Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

My Supreme Goddess Thou Art

I can see Heaven clearly whilst gazing deeply in your eyes now, 
Where the sweet caramel melts deliciously into heartbeats pure.

The radiant light of our eternal love dwells deep within our hearts,
As our souls are captivated by God’s aura of divine enchantment.
 
A nirvana fills our destiny as passionate lovers kissing softly so,
Mesmerized by the enraptured emotions we forever shareth as one.

A wild wondrous wallflower you are—shining now ever brightly,
As that angelic spirit in mortal presence on Earth by God’s hand.

Dearest one I sayeth truly now my supreme goddess thou art,
As we holdeth one another in an ardent embrace by God’s grace.

The fiery passion of our forever love is a pure beam of silken starlight,  
Which bathes the darkest depths of the cosmos in a heavenly radiance.

What more can two people hope for in this world of finite limitations?
Our shared love and rich emotions form the destiny we seek with God.

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – April 29, 2017
(Couplet)

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Gary Bateman May 2, 2017 at 4:01 PM Hello Liam, I wanted to take another walk here through our mutual prose. Several particularly interesting sub-themes stick out that we might want to further consider in future writes. (More later on this.) Again, I'm very pleased we could work this co-write into our separate writing schedules. I sincerely hope that many of our fellow Soupers will take a read of this enchanting couplet. "Time To Wash It Down With Some Irish"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Gary Bateman May 1, 2017 at 8:01 AM Liam Mate!! The final result of our shared thoughts and efforts on this Couplet turned out very well. I always enjoy it when we both have a chance to combine our efforts on creating poetry with an uplifting message of love, hope, and enchantment. I hope everyone else who has a chance to read this poem comes away with an uplifting feeling as well!! Cheers and Best, Gary Gary Bateman May 2, 2017 at 4:03 PM Thanks Liam!! Splashing ink together on projects like this one are always much fun and always very worthwhile Mate!! Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid May 1, 2017 at 4:44 PM i thought it came together a gift of a write gary always a pleasure joining ink with you pal

Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2017 at 2:24 PM - Liam and Gary, this poem is so amazingly beautiful ... I love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid May 1, 2017 at 4:42 PM thank you deeply sunshine smiles bless you always pal

Demetrios Trifiatis April 30, 2017 at 2:05 AM A collaboration made in heaven producing bliss as a result! Two of my dearest poets and friends, Liam and Gary, Gary and Liam. Congratulations a 7 to each! Liam Mcdaid May 1, 2017 at 4:41 PM your so kind dear friend bless you always pal

Dorian Petersen Potter April 29, 2017 at 6:46 PM Hi Liam n' Gary!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + to each !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Liam Mcdaid May 1, 2017 at 4:34 PM thank you dorian for the lovely comment deeply appreciated