My Sun , My Moon, My Stars

He is my sun, my moon, my stars,
he is each breath I take.
My soul and his are joined as one.
This is the vow I make.

He is each breath I take.
My life, my love, forever his.
This is the vow I make
as two hearts beat as one.

My life, my love, forever his 
as long as God allows.
As two hearts beat as one
while in each others arms.

As long as God allows,
when we die may it be
while in each others arms.
He is my own true love.

When we die, may it be,
my soul and his are joined as one.
He is my own true love.
He is my sun, my moon, my stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 8:58 PM
such a dreamy write! if it were so for all of us what a different world this would be light & love
Onclaud Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 10:41 AM
intoxicating me no end, francine... winning's best!.. thank you for appreciating my " pet" piece .. you brought me back to those precious times i had!..:) huggs!
Horne Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 10:23 AM
What a beautiful romantic piece, Francine. I find pantoums so hard. Thank you - your contest was a lot of fun, as always : )
Long Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:34 AM
I tired this form and was not successful nice job cory
J.T. Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 2:26 AM
Good poem. Poetry in one of its complex forms.
Nair Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 2:24 AM
well-written and lovely
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