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My Sun

I watch your blue eyes shine -so glad you are mine then reach to touch your face that gleams with sun's warm grace. You look at me and smile, and for just a short while, I swear like sun it glows as love from your soul flows. Your lips I bend to kiss. As soon as I do this, you wrap your arms round me. Oh, joy, please do not flee. You need me; I need you. A love like this so true is meant to stay - to grow! I will not let you go. Till we are old and grey, next to you I will stay. Yes, Dear, you are the one who is for me - my sun. Feb 7, 2018 For Silent One's 120 words Contest

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Date: 2/14/2018 5:47:00 PM
Sweet, Andrea. This was sweet.
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Andrea, fantastic write.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:05:00 AM
Back to congratulate you Andrea, well done...
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:28:00 PM
Andy this so reaches the heart. You can't help but smile :)
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful, I felt the emotion, every word a tiny bit of your soul exposed. Congratulations on your win Andrea... Mick
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful, I felt the emotion, every word a tiny bit of your soul exposed. Congratulations on your win Andrea... Mick
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:13:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this romantic write. Congratulations on your 1st place win . It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:06:00 AM
Andrea, I love this, it flows so effortlessly. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 2/10/2018 8:54:00 AM
This was so beautiful Andrea.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/9/2018 2:14:00 AM
Enjoyed much this sunny flowing piece andrea, I do attend pemtecostal services, although I accept all Christians, with the premise that things can be resolved if all sujucate the self to Gods will I I have a slanted idea show me, I seem to remember sending you a mail about my meeting with a vicar Mr Mclay, I don't know if you'd take that situation as a sign? All the events are true to life'
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Date: 2/8/2018 8:56:00 PM
Such a beautiful write... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 2/8/2018 4:49:00 PM
GL with this lovely write, Andrea!
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Date: 2/8/2018 12:28:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...best wishes
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Date: 2/7/2018 4:26:00 PM
just beautiful, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/7/2018 3:34:00 PM
well done Andrea....I have yet to try one of Silent One's challenge poems
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Date: 2/7/2018 3:32:00 PM
So very romantic Andrea! And a great job with the structure defined in the contest. Best of luck! ~ Judy
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Date: 2/7/2018 3:11:00 PM
So romantic and beautiful Andrea.
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Date: 2/7/2018 2:28:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This is so beautiful and passionate. I found it to be very romantic as well. An apt piece for Valentine's Day. You did great with the 120 words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/7/2018 2:24:00 PM
Very romantic depiction Andrea..love the way you managed the flow even with the 6 word constraint. Nicely done..you will win.
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Date: 2/7/2018 2:00:00 PM
great entry Andrea, it's nice to have passion and grow old together...goodluck
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Date: 2/7/2018 1:28:00 PM
Great entry Andrea, best wishes...
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