Andrea Dietrich Poet Couplet

My Sun

I watch your blue eyes shine -so glad you are mine
then reach to touch your face that gleams with sun's warm grace.

You look at me and smile, and for just a short while,
I swear like sun it glows as love from your soul flows.

Your lips I bend to kiss. As soon as I do this,
you wrap your arms round me. Oh, joy, please do not flee.

You need me; I need you. A love like this so true
is meant to stay - to grow! I will not let you go.

Till we are old and grey, next to you I will stay.
Yes, Dear, you are the one who is for me - my sun.

Feb 7, 2018 For Silent One's  120 words Contest

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Normie Payton February 14, 2018 at 5:47 PM Sweet, Andrea. This was sweet.

Eve Roper February 11, 2018 at 8:44 PM Congratulations on your winning write, Andrea, fantastic write.. Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith February 11, 2018 at 11:05 AM Back to congratulate you Andrea, well done...

FJ Thomas February 10, 2018 at 3:28 PM Andy this so reaches the heart. You can't help but smile :)

Mick Talbot February 10, 2018 at 10:43 AM Beautiful, I felt the emotion, every word a tiny bit of your soul exposed. Congratulations on your win Andrea... Mick

Mick Talbot February 10, 2018 at 10:43 AM Beautiful, I felt the emotion, every word a tiny bit of your soul exposed. Congratulations on your win Andrea... Mick

Joseph May February 10, 2018 at 9:59 AM Congrats on your win Andrea

Line Gauthier February 10, 2018 at 9:50 AM Congrats on your win Andrea. Well done.

Alexis Y. February 10, 2018 at 9:13 AM Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this romantic write. Congratulations on your 1st place win . It was well deserved:-) Alexis

John Gondolf February 10, 2018 at 9:06 AM Andrea, I love this, it flows so effortlessly. Congrats on your win. John

Silent One February 10, 2018 at 8:54 AM This was so beautiful Andrea.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Joe Maverick February 9, 2018 at 2:14 AM Enjoyed much this sunny flowing piece andrea, I do attend pemtecostal services, although I accept all Christians, with the premise that things can be resolved if all sujucate the self to Gods will I I have a slanted idea show me, I seem to remember sending you a mail about my meeting with a vicar Mr Mclay, I don't know if you'd take that situation as a sign? All the events are true to life'

Supraja Kannan February 8, 2018 at 8:56 PM Such a beautiful write... Reads like a winner...

Kim Rodrigues February 8, 2018 at 4:49 PM GL with this lovely write, Andrea!

Joseph May February 8, 2018 at 12:28 AM Beautiful write Andrea...best wishes

Ilene Bauer February 7, 2018 at 4:26 PM just beautiful, andrea! best of luck in the contest...

John Lawless February 7, 2018 at 3:34 PM well done Andrea....I have yet to try one of Silent One's challenge poems

Judith S February 7, 2018 at 3:32 PM So very romantic Andrea! And a great job with the structure defined in the contest. Best of luck! ~ Judy

Tim Smith February 7, 2018 at 3:11 PM So romantic and beautiful Andrea.

Alexis Y. February 7, 2018 at 2:28 PM Hi Andrea, This is so beautiful and passionate. I found it to be very romantic as well. An apt piece for Valentine's Day. You did great with the 120 words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit February 7, 2018 at 2:24 PM Very romantic depiction Andrea..love the way you managed the flow even with the 6 word constraint. Nicely done..you will win.

Frederic Parker February 7, 2018 at 2:00 PM great entry Andrea, it's nice to have passion and grow old together...goodluck

Charlie Smith February 7, 2018 at 1:28 PM Great entry Andrea, best wishes...