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My Sun

..........Smile forged with tears and sorrow was all I could feel i felt the pain on my rips as my breath start to break the say its a heart break I think is a death call like a gun short on the four head as I stood on the four front cautioned with flame of fire that burns directly the heart Slowly I break down as the pain speeds up all I could see is yonder yonder stranding forth s it's hand calling me down to under world fighting it was the next option Strength far away from me water run down the bridges I don't want the call,not now the sun sets up fear to the skin now dishing out death to the soul she is the light to my life ..........Could she be my doom?....................

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Date: 3/8/2016 11:37:00 AM
Awesome read and imagery
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:48:00 PM
Hi Anthony O, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing ----SKAT
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Best Anthony
Date: 8/10/2017 5:02:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/10/2013 7:32:00 AM
nice concept
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