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My Sun

Brought U up 2 know right from WRONG Was hard on U so you’d B STRONG Looked up 1 day & U was GONE Chasin Raw Dollaz, go getta getting ON Somebody told me U got crossed at the SPOT One drop of a dime & the Block got HOT Held back my tears, got ova the SHOCK Swallowed my fears, put my jewels in HOCK I know at first it was done for ME That’s why I come to set U FREE So U may Repent B4 U enter a PLEA Face the consequence multiplied by THREE I got this feeling this may Be my DOIN 2 hard on U coulda lead to yo RUIN My bad lil one I didn’t KNOW I held so much love I failed to SHOW U needed yo Momma, it makes me SAD I worked all nite, neva knew yo DAD But you’ll be A’ite, give it time you’ll SEE It’z hard to admit but U a beast like ME Datz why I accept U 4 who U ARE A man, A Felon, My Sun, My STAR

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/18/2012 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, you have written so beautifully. It really hurts to know all the love and pain and energy you put into one, and sometimes things don't turn out right, but in the end we still are there for them.
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:13:00 AM
good writing ! nice
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Tone. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 11/21/2011 12:26:00 PM
This is nice and well written. I liked it
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