My Summer Day's At the Park

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Kissing you while passing by the school yard,
We're holding hands with your head on my shoulder,
"I love you chérie", is exactly what I told her,
"I love you too", said my love right beside me,
"I love you more", I said to ma chérie,
It's twelve p.m lets go out for ice cream,
Two minutes later we ditch it for hugging,
Right now we're swinging on swings at the park,
We hold our hands out to catch each others arms,
I finally caught yours and still swung away, 
I saw you smile and that made my day

It's two p.m, I thought it'd be much more later,
But being with you makes time go much quicker,
By now we're walking with your hand in my hand,
We're at the park and everything's going as planned,
We pass the baseball field and into the old bleachers,
Dirty and rusty but we'll ignore all the features,
Honestly I'd rather kiss her then talk to her,
But then again I wanna hear her till the end of the summer,
Five minutes later we're on top of each other,
We decided we'd rather be somewhere together

An hour passed and where in the middle of three,
And right now we're kissing under this tree,
The taste of your lollipop I thought was strawberry,
Until you correct me for it being cherry,
It's four in the afternoon and we're walking to another place,
I can't help myself from looking at your face

It six o'clock where did they time go by?
I should be leaving but I hate saying goodbyes,
It feels so early but I promise I should bring you home,
I would never let you walk home alone, so
I'll take guard as soon as we're gone,
You're home right now and I should let you go,
You tell me you have to and I just give up,
"I love you", she says says while she hugs me,
"I love you too", I say back so sadly,
"Let's spend tomorrow together", she suggests,
"Of course", I said, I'd rather say it again

We start the cycle every now and then,
And deep inside I know it's worth to do it again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/18/2010 8:48:00 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Ariel. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:18:00 PM
Time goes fast as you are heart races with every pause and pulsing moments of love.. By the time you know it the day is gone and you are in wonder. The brighter sides off all things is your Summer memories in the park. With your emotions being handled in ever loving way,.. Enjoyed you summer stroll and my walk thru your poem,..p.d..
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