Cherie Thomas Poet Acrostic

My Submission

This heart cant wait
To fall right in.

And these words 
Hope that they will sink in

These eyes, see through your disguise
This soul is craving, your sweet sin.

This love is so hard to live in
I exhalt all my feelings,

Im un-distracted 
By my surroundings

My meditation, is engaged
By solely one thing

The thoughts I harbour, from within
My spirit is soaring,

From a love im adoreing
A sentimental bareing

Of what my hearts wearing
A visual exhibition

Of my own admission.

Is my submission of what 
Im wishing. for you, to let me in.

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Poet Destroyer A October 19, 2013 at 11:48 PM Hi Cherie, this is lovely...... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Johnny Rhinem October 15, 2013 at 1:29 PM † 'My Soul Is Craving, Your Sweet Sin.' Wow Girl, Maybe It Can Be Purely Love Less The Sin ? Hmmm, Lucky Girl! Congratulations, Upon Your Passion Dripping As Beautiful Feature; Magnifico. I Love Your Name By The Way, Cherie, Tis So Lovely ˜ Love, John

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2013 at 5:01 AM - Pleased to read your featured poem - It's a well-written poem. - Congratulations, Cherie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis October 12, 2013 at 11:15 AM cherie You allow the reader to feel what is in your heart and take them on an emotional journey. Nice job

Gerald Kithinji September 16, 2013 at 9:17 AM Please do come in, said the poet in reply. I so do, too.

Pace Ink-U-Script June 10, 2013 at 8:49 PM Beautifully written!!! :) Cherie Thomas June 10, 2013 at 10:05 PM I so appreciate your comment,,,, thankyou!!!!:)