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This heart cant wait To fall right in. And these words Hope that they will sink in These eyes, see through your disguise This soul is craving, your sweet sin. This love is so hard to live in I exhalt all my feelings, Im un-distracted By my surroundings My meditation, is engaged By solely one thing The thoughts I harbour, from within My spirit is soaring, From a love im adoreing A sentimental bareing Of what my hearts wearing A visual exhibition Of my own admission. Is my submission of what Im wishing. for you, to let me in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2013 11:48:00 PM
Hi Cherie, this is lovely...... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 10/15/2013 1:29:00 PM
† 'My Soul Is Craving, Your Sweet Sin.' Wow Girl, Maybe It Can Be Purely Love Less The Sin ? Hmmm, Lucky Girl! Congratulations, Upon Your Passion Dripping As Beautiful Feature; Magnifico. I Love Your Name By The Way, Cherie, Tis So Lovely ˜ Love, John
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Date: 10/15/2013 5:01:00 AM
- Pleased to read your featured poem - It's a well-written poem. - Congratulations, Cherie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:15:00 AM
cherie You allow the reader to feel what is in your heart and take them on an emotional journey. Nice job
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:17:00 AM
Please do come in, said the poet in reply. I so do, too.
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Date: 6/10/2013 8:49:00 PM
Beautifully written!!! :)
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 6/10/2013 10:05:00 PM
I so appreciate your comment,,,, thankyou!!!!:)

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