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My Stupid Boy Friend

2nyt u go w/ me ndr d blu munlyt
pls do 8 swithrt  f u luv me tyt

I’l w8 4 u @ ur bak g8
go awt ryt away wen evry1 s n bed

dz wer d las tx msgs  of my s2pd bf
ho 1nts 2 elop w/o myndng d concquens




Translation:

Tonight you go with me under the blue moonlight
Please do it sweetheart  if you love me tight

I’ll wait for you at your back gate
Go out right away when everyone is in bed

These were the last text messages of my stupid boy friend
Who wants to elope without minding the consequence




Sept. 7, 2012

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/10/2012 1:47:00 PM Hi..leonora... stopping by to say hi. How are you? Making my way here today for a while.. I'll be back tonight...love...pd Login to Reply

David Scott Date: 9/10/2012 1:38:00 PM hi thank you for your comments on mine this one i think is of a personal nature all id say as long as its a person you are comfortable with and are safe i cant reallyt coment anymore on situation nice write though clever text xx davidscott Login to Reply

Karen Croft Date: 9/10/2012 11:22:00 AM wow i'm way behind on the texting thing thanks for the translation i was a little slow Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/9/2012 6:44:00 AM interesting, i'm learning everyday, oh! did you go elope that is, only joking. harry Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/9/2012 12:12:00 AM I forgot to ask you. Did you have to get a translator to do yours here? I honestly could not read my own poem if I had not written it, because I used a google site to tanslate to Text talk!! Sorry I can't look for any poems of yours I may have missed. I have no time this week for Soup like I usually do. It's killing me. Hopefully soon I will be back to normal in my comments! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 9/8/2012 2:19:00 PM OKAY! This certainly was unique!!! Very clever though... neat concept! Good luck in the contest! Love and happy thoughts, Jack Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/8/2012 7:36:00 AM an impressive text Leonora .. good job on the entry .. winning ways with best wishes .. so sorry to hear of your health issues .. we will pray for u for speedy recovery luv .. the Soup family uplifts and encourages always.. u r never alone ..please know that and be comforted dear .. Login to Reply

Kasim Ishmael Date: 9/8/2012 6:51:00 AM hey now you make me want to elope with you.so i will come to back gate tonight, have a great day,friend Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/8/2012 1:13:00 AM HEY, this is really clever!! I am so glad there was a translation to go with it, or I would never have figured it out. Awesome take on the contest, my friend. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 9/8/2012 12:08:00 AM so nice my friend...(^_^) gud luck n d contest.. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/7/2012 8:09:00 PM I find these text msgs fascinating and am always glad to have the translation nearby. II'm not very adept with all this technological jargon we have today. Is this for a contest? It's wonderful and hope you take a win if so. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/7/2012 7:21:00 PM HI, Leonora, i have one of these 2.. a stupid boyfriend.. well he want to marry in VEGAS,, lol... this is a great entry for Davids, contest... good luck.. always~PD Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/7/2012 3:01:00 PM It was a sweet message .... Is he always so romantic .... Have a nice weekend Leonora. Luck in contest for you. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/7/2012 10:51:00 AM Yep I am enjoying it, I wanted to try this comp but I don't think I am up to it, all the best it will do well I am sure xx Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 9/7/2012 9:14:00 AM to be continued.......pls. standby for the ending. thanks a lot!!!! Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/7/2012 8:44:00 AM life doesn't have to be so quick.....don't be pressured. enjoyed reading your work! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 9/7/2012 9:00:00 AM ha ha ha.... thank you so much Doris but i regret for making it too slow.LOL. thanks for reading my poems. i also want to entertain everybody by this couplet of mine. i hope others will enjoy reading it too. thank you for enjoying!!! luv and hugs leonora