Jeanne Mcgee Poet Free verse

My Stardust Memories

I remember, before I really got to know you well
When I was under your enchantment
My eyes full of stardust sparkles
I would have lived by your side forever
But now, I’d rather live miles apart
And keep those stardust memories as my fantasy



6-14-2020
STARDUST Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 6:14 AM Stardust memories that make you wise. That's a lovely muse Jeanne. Best wishes for the contest :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 15, 2020 at 5:46 PM I can relate Jeanne. Sometimes that stardust blinds us a little. Beautiful! Best for a top win! xxoo

Caren Krutsinger June 14, 2020 at 10:25 PM “When I was under your enchantment” - such a pretty poem. Especially this line.

Arturo Michael June 14, 2020 at 6:10 PM It over...stardust has blown away...Nice one

Regina Mcintosh June 14, 2020 at 1:46 PM A awesome write, dear friend and I can empathize with this one. Love to you and prayers too, Gina Jeanne Mcgee June 14, 2020 at 4:05 PM Thanks Gina...I'll always accept those prayers...helps me navigate my way...xoxox

Vijay Pandit June 14, 2020 at 1:21 PM Bittersweet ending--a beautiful write in stardust memories, Jeanne. Jeanne Mcgee June 14, 2020 at 4:04 PM I sometimes surprise myself when writing when feelings like this pop out that I had not acknowledged before...this is one way to do therapy!

Rico Leffanta June 14, 2020 at 1:19 PM Sounds like true love to me! Aloha! Rico Jeanne Mcgee June 14, 2020 at 4:02 PM Doesn't it though?? lol, sheeze.