My Sri Lankan Sweet Pea

It’s now crystal clear… I need not be told
I am falling for a Sri Lankan sweet pea. I can’t hold
My feelings… she’s a darling dame, a beauty to behold
She’s got a guy, but to me she’s more than gains and gold

How I wish I could live forever in her singing sky,
Her rhymes and rhapsodies ring… giving me wings to fly
I have promised my self that I will not love for now… it turned a lie
My heart is hot for a buddy I have not seen… I need an eagle’s eye

I have never seen, held or used a Sri Lankan rupee
But I am dying for this colorful… cute Asian sweet pea
I’m caged in thy colorful cell oh Crystal… you’ve got the key
Give me thy love, life and all; please do this to set me free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/12/2009 10:52:00 PM
Adeleke! this is beautiful feelings expressed here I loved it ... ty for your comments on my scribbles I am glad you enjoy them Love Jayne x
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:30:00 AM
yes! I love all the comments! I am now a member of your fan-club! Adeleke! this is a really cool poem of longing, set in a place quite faraway from my world! (Minnesota) love it! thanks for sharing these feelings in print, and oh....how did you know I was so down and blue yest. I almost quit the soup? your kind words helped me recover emotionally, (I don't know why, but my feelings are much too sensitive!) jim
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:13:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmwwwwwwwaaaaaaahhh!!
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:12:00 AM
I love you!!! wot more can I say??.... Thanx darling Ady.....ma best buddy......!!!
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:56:00 PM
Excellen writing Adeleke.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:04:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL PLEA FOR YOUR SWEET PEA---we are all human and we all pass through feelings my friend---and the sweet poetry makes us live in dreams, it is good to live a dream every now and then,till reality knocks again,but in our realities we can find the beauty of life-great tribute and emotions well penned--and thanks for your kind comments--charma
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:50:00 AM
Good use of imagery for a creative poem. Well done. My thoughts and prayers go with you hoping you find your faith again. Mine has seen me through a lot of tough times. See your soup mail. Keep on writing! Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 6/13/2009 9:16:00 AM
I love Sri Lankan rupee..the entire third verse is done very well..this is a very good piece...
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