Get Your Premium Membership

My Spirit Lives

My spirit strives for attainment of adrenaline containment from poetry peaked sensations fused with fulfilling pulsations. Words score elation obtainment. Writing is my prime sustainment, my souls ever held entrainment. Poetry rhymes my foundations. My spirit lives. How great that poem retainment lifts my muse with entertainment. Poetry's frequent causation are pain spilled needs for cessation from God's ink inspired arraignment. My spirit lives. August 2, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment
Date: 8/18/2019 4:48:00 AM
How pleasing to read a poem with rhythm, rhyme and form; for which you clearly have affinity. Small point - you say ‘my spirit’; is that not the true:’I’? Well written, Cay Cay,
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 8:02:00 PM
Dear Caycay, you created a wonderful poem here. Do you have any poems that are extra special you would like me to see? I finally need to get off here!! I am all caught up with my life (for now) but need to start dinner!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 7:36:00 AM
CayCay, I really loved your poem. Unfortunately in the line "Poetry's most frequent causation" there are 9 syllables. Thanks for entering my contest. Hugs Charlie
Login to Reply
Jennings Avatar
CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/6/2019 8:08:00 PM
I use howmanysyllables.com and according to them, the line is eight syllables long. I just redid it on their site and still got eight; however, manually counting it does seem to be nine to me, also. I dunno! It has always been a reliable site and what most contest sponsors recommend. Sorry Charlie!
Date: 8/4/2019 4:55:00 AM
CayCay I always give myself time to read your poems - they are all special and what I must say to you now, I read all your comments to Victor and I actually saw your soul - pure, loving, empathetic, sympathetic and vulnerable - you are one in a million and so proud to call you my friend whom I love dearly! Hugs, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Jennings Avatar
CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/6/2019 11:38:00 PM
I am deeply incredibly touched that you took time and loving effort to 'see' me. I do that, too, but don't recall anyone saying that in regards to me, not as you just did. Your comment is very special and precious to me. Thank you, Jenny - and thank Victor, too - I am blown away. Love, CayCay
Date: 8/3/2019 4:11:00 PM
Excellent poetry, and ever so cleverly written.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/3/2019 4:17:00 AM
Splendid rondeau, all monorhymes. A worthy entry for the contest. Poetic hugs.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2019 4:27:00 PM
Spirited and inspirational, CayCay. Terrific in every way! :) gw
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2019 3:12:00 PM
Superbly penned CayCay, great imagery with super-expressive use of words simply stunning. Have a great day, Blessings always, Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2019 12:17:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. This was a pleasure to read today
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2019 11:26:00 AM
Inspiring and uplifting poem dearest, CayCay! Much enjoyed!
Login to Reply