Dean Masciarelli Poet Free verse

My Spirit Is Like a Hungry Flower In the Rain

My spirit is like a hungry flower in the rain

Written By Dean Masciarelli

December 14, 2009


My spirit is like a hungry flower in the rain

That wants to continue to grow and climb

As it soaks up everything until its time is done

And when the sun  

No longer shines again

My petals will fall one by one to the ground

And then all of my seeds will be spread around

To all the ones who I happened to leave behind

So that they may continue to grow and blossom

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Simone Segal December 16, 2009 at 1:29 PM Thank you so much, your comments are as beautiful as your poems! love Simone

Audrey Haick December 15, 2009 at 7:38 AM Beautiful poem, Dean! This is straight from a generous heart! Peace to you today and always, Audrey Great job!

Mary Meade Stephenson December 14, 2009 at 1:32 PM Wonderful write dean...superb imagery and so beautiful. A fabulous message conveyed. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read and your nice comments on my writes~Mary

Robert A. Dufresne December 14, 2009 at 5:17 AM Great poem Dean. Guess that is why we have to work so hard to make sure the seed are good ones. -Robert

Sara Kendrick December 14, 2009 at 4:26 AM Beautiful sentiments. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing with your gifts growing through the years to come. Sara

Derrick Burton December 14, 2009 at 2:09 AM beautiful piece of poetry here... loved the beginning as well, enjoyed and have a great night. :)

Carolyn Devonshire December 14, 2009 at 1:19 AM If you live your life this way, your legacy will be timeless, Dean. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn