Cory Long Poet Acrostic

My Spirit

 My spirit stays strong, even through the darkest of times.

Suddenly it was taken away.
Pleading and begging him to get off me.
Invisible my cries went for years.
Ripped out from underneath me, my childhood was stolen.
Isolated scared and guilt ridden.
Taking away apart of me forever in an instant.

Cory long
9-4-2011
Write it deep and dramatic, Please contest.

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Michael J. Falotico September 9, 2011 at 6:52 PM Amazing work and win for you..... I got home today and there at my door was your Book!!!! Excellent!!!!! I love it and am so proud of you for doing it....best wish for much more success in the future.. love Michael

Jack Horne September 9, 2011 at 9:49 AM Many congrats on all your wins, Cory : )

Kim Merryman September 8, 2011 at 7:02 PM Congrats on your win, Cory!

Nette Onclaud September 8, 2011 at 2:29 PM cheers to you for a top win, russel.. so compelling! ;) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2011 at 7:48 AM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Constance La France's "Write It Deep And Dramatic, Please contest Cory. Love, Carol

Jodie Williams September 8, 2011 at 4:58 AM Congratulations on your win Cory with this worthy piece, the imagery is impressive. Well done

David Williams September 8, 2011 at 3:53 AM hey Cory congrats on your truly fantastic win..David

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 1:08 AM oops, it was deep and dramatic,but also yours was dark!!!

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 1:07 AM c ongratulations, Cory, you got it BOTH dark and deep!!

Lee Ramage September 8, 2011 at 12:12 AM Cory, it is both deep and dramatic, and I hope not true. Take care Lee

Bob Quigley September 7, 2011 at 11:50 PM Well, she asked for deep and dramatic and that's what you gave her. Well written. Congratulations Cory

Dr.Ram Mehta September 7, 2011 at 10:11 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance.cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 7, 2011 at 10:01 PM CONGRATS CORY ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS ALLURING ACROSTIC PIECE MY FRIEND..LUV..

Tracy Edwards September 7, 2011 at 8:26 PM Congrats on your win Cory luv..its an honour to share a 1st place with you xxx

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2011 at 8:15 PM I hope not you but a topic about which that you have written..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in a contest..Sara

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 7, 2011 at 7:23 PM Cory-Excellent! Congrats. to you!

Nick Bagnall September 7, 2011 at 7:29 AM Well written , am stuck for words to express how I feel.

Constance La France September 5, 2011 at 5:09 PM Soup mail in a moment ~~

Russell Sivey September 5, 2011 at 10:58 AM Great words! Good luck in the contest!!

David Williams September 5, 2011 at 5:37 AM hey Cory, shouldn't there be a line between 4 and 5,, David

Kash Poet September 5, 2011 at 3:22 AM Very nice cory...but it seems you missed the 2nd line here which should strat with'Y'....