My Spinning Fate

Throwing my life into such a fate,
Shows how far it starts off late,

My life is spinning and it’s spinning fast,
Circling around in a world so vast,

 Around and around the merry-go-round goes,
Until all of what I don’t know flows,

Flowing in circles around and around,
Until one day ill hit the ground,

The ground as cold and harsh while I hit,
Will throw me back into the pit,

The circling pit from which I came
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 6, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Hello Charles... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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