My Sphere

I'm taking a moment with my brain, my memories
Each of period that I've been through
Flashing like bolts, seems like unwillingly to recall
A single blink of my eyes brought me to the world of unknown 

I still see the same sky
I still feel the same breeze
But I stood on a different situations

Bleeding on the journey that I chose
Each foot print be the story, be the history which rusted
Life is just a matter of time
That's what those people said

Hanging on the opportunities which achieved
I lean on everything that I could grip
Struggle to stand over pieces of me
Though sometimes sad to be alone, sick and hurt

Isolated by the crowds of my head
I build my own chamber, my own kingdom
Where people cannot see
Where people cannot reach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 11, 2013 at 9:34 AM
wow this is deep... your spear is proof.... I think i have one of my own.. Yanny , thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA
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May 11, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Thank you Linda, having such a lovely words by you is really boosting my spirit today :) wishing you a lovely and wonderful day as well :D hug, yanny
Anglesey Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 9:25 AM
I relate to this. Building my own little world nothing penetrates unless I allow it to be. Really well written and expressed
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April 28, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Thanks Karen, sometimes we need to have our little chamber, don't we? :) glad to have a company in this :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny
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March 29, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Good morning Yanny. Is it already Saturday for you?
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March 30, 2013 at 12:31 AM
Hello Rick :D yeap, It's Saturday now :D wishing you a lovely weekend there :D hug, yanny
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March 29, 2013 at 4:13 PM
i truly like your sphere,, and the imagery it creates...
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March 30, 2013 at 12:32 AM
Thank you Harry, very happy to see you around, wishing you a lovely Saturday there :D hug, yanny
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March 29, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Nice treat to read this wonderful poem. Have a peaceful night.
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