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My Soul With Art Chimes

The heart words its sweet lines Pen marks papers and has tough times Passion and duty, each one whines And my soul with art chimes These are a teacher poet's rhymes. I wanted to write a Lind6886 poem but not for any contest! EXAM TIME!! Thank you so much, Robert.. Best regards.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/30/2019 3:02:00 AM

"my soul with art chimes and teacher poet's rhymes" both resonate with my soul, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/1/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Caren for reading and feeling my humble words.. my great pleasure. Regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2019 5:53:00 PM

Fantastic brevity in this pen; beautifully written words, thanks for a lovely red.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/12/2019 4:42:00 AM

An honour having you on my page, M.L. Kiser.. Thank you heaps for your generosity and kindness.. I highly value your visit and rewarding feedback. Blessings.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 6/3/2019 11:28:00 PM

Beautiful :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/12/2019 4:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my humble poem! My pleasure. Blessings.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2019 5:57:00 PM

Ah, let it chime! Lovely pen.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/12/2019 4:39:00 AM

A great pleasure responding to your kind and appreciative words, M.L. Kiser.. thank you so much for being here to read and support my humble work. Blessings.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/25/2019 7:31:00 AM

Yes they are...A nice write...Enjoyed

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/26/2019 4:01:00 PM

My pleasure, Arturo.. I'm glad you liked and enjoyed my humble work.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards. Blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/23/2019 1:06:00 AM

A wonderful Monorhyme dear soul sister and wise expressive words written to create a gem of wisdom - your teacher poet's rhymes are like a song sung to my heart and it is all because of your soul that "with art chimes" Blessings dear Besma and hugs Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/26/2019 3:59:00 PM

Kindness.. sweetness.. beauty.. love flowing into the depth of the heart while reading your fine words.. I'm deeply touched by your generosity and genuineness, dearest Jenny.. always looking forward to seeing you on my page.. thank you so much soul sister.. love and hugs.. God bless you.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/21/2019 10:16:00 PM

Well penned Besma. The first line is a real grabber

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/26/2019 3:54:00 PM

You do honour my humble work with your generous and supportive feedback.. thank you so much Allen. God bless you.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/20/2019 6:48:00 PM

I loved your idea of souls having Art. Beautiful poem, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:45:00 PM

My honour and pleasure, Ralph! Thank you so much for being here to read and appreciate my humble work.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/19/2019 12:39:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:43:00 PM

You shine on my page and radiate warmth, dear Anne-Lise.. thank you so much for your sweet comment.. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/19/2019 9:10:00 AM

My dear friend, this is wonderful poetry! This would qualify for being a Lind68868 poem as well. As it meets the syllable count perfectly, is five verses, and could be in the "comparative thought" section-and in rhyme instead of verse. Love it, a great fav...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:41:00 PM

I'm indeed honoured and deeply humbled by your honest and kind appreciation.. I highly value your generosity and humility.. you elevate souls and illuminate minds.. thank you so much, Robert.. a great pleasure to write a work that can meet your new form poetry.. my deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/19/2019 3:37:00 AM

Awww I can certainly relate to these words of yours, Besma! Luckily for me the pressure of time consuming exams is now behind me, yet I miss those days, somewhat! A clap of encouragement to you and all dedicated teachers! Keep up the good work. Your monorhyme is enjoyable. ~ Enjoy the weekend (unless you too tend to take your work home!) #Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:34:00 PM

Indeed, teaching is consuming heart and mind.. the only solace is the love we have to this vocation and also the pleasure of giving.. and surely this resonates with you, dear colleague.. thank you so much, Paul for honouring me and my humble work with your visit and highly valued words.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2019 4:29:00 PM

you surely know the fine musicality which makes a poem appealing, besma... much delighted... huggs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:29:00 PM

Dear Nette, Your kind words and praise fill my heart with bliss.. and I feel blessed to have such a beautiful soul here on my page reading and appreciating my humble work.. thank you so much, Love and hugs.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/18/2019 3:11:00 PM

Wonderfully said Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Allen for your visit and appreciative feedback.. Best regards.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2019 12:19:00 PM

Every line resonates in rhythm and excels in flow and tone..such a beautiful write Besma. I enjoyed the tunes that sing of the teacher's pen.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2019 5:24:00 PM

You bring to life a work of art by your genuine and generous feedback, dear Vijay.. I'm deeply grateful for your continuous support and encouragement.. always a great pleasure to read your rewarding appreciations.. my deepest regards.. stay blessed always.