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My Soul With Art Chimes

The heart words its sweet lines
Pen marks papers and has tough times
Passion and duty, each one whines
And my soul with art chimes
These are a teacher poet's rhymes.


I wanted to write a Lind6886 poem but not for any contest!
 
EXAM TIME!!

Thank you so much, Robert.. Best regards.

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/30/2019 3:02:00 AM "my soul with art chimes and teacher poet's rhymes" both resonate with my soul, Besma. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2019 10:48:00 AM Thank you so much dear Caren for reading and feeling my humble words.. my great pleasure. Regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/9/2019 5:53:00 PM Fantastic brevity in this pen; beautifully written words, thanks for a lovely red. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 7/12/2019 4:42:00 AM An honour having you on my page, M.L. Kiser.. Thank you heaps for your generosity and kindness.. I highly value your visit and rewarding feedback. Blessings.

Swetha Vangaveti Date: 6/3/2019 11:28:00 PM Beautiful :) Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 7/12/2019 4:39:00 AM Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my humble poem! My pleasure. Blessings.

M. L. Kiser Date: 5/30/2019 5:57:00 PM Ah, let it chime! Lovely pen. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 7/12/2019 4:39:00 AM A great pleasure responding to your kind and appreciative words, M.L. Kiser.. thank you so much for being here to read and support my humble work. Blessings.

Arturo Michael Date: 5/25/2019 7:31:00 AM Yes they are...A nice write...Enjoyed Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/26/2019 4:01:00 PM My pleasure, Arturo.. I'm glad you liked and enjoyed my humble work.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards. Blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/23/2019 1:06:00 AM A wonderful Monorhyme dear soul sister and wise expressive words written to create a gem of wisdom - your teacher poet's rhymes are like a song sung to my heart and it is all because of your soul that "with art chimes" Blessings dear Besma and hugs Jennifer. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/26/2019 3:59:00 PM Kindness.. sweetness.. beauty.. love flowing into the depth of the heart while reading your fine words.. I'm deeply touched by your generosity and genuineness, dearest Jenny.. always looking forward to seeing you on my page.. thank you so much soul sister.. love and hugs.. God bless you.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 5/21/2019 10:16:00 PM Well penned Besma. The first line is a real grabber Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/26/2019 3:54:00 PM You do honour my humble work with your generous and supportive feedback.. thank you so much Allen. God bless you.

Ralph Sergi Date: 5/20/2019 6:48:00 PM I loved your idea of souls having Art. Beautiful poem, Besma! Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:45:00 PM My honour and pleasure, Ralph! Thank you so much for being here to read and appreciate my humble work.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/19/2019 12:39:00 PM - A wonderful poem, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:43:00 PM You shine on my page and radiate warmth, dear Anne-Lise.. thank you so much for your sweet comment.. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley Date: 5/19/2019 9:10:00 AM My dear friend, this is wonderful poetry! This would qualify for being a Lind68868 poem as well. As it meets the syllable count perfectly, is five verses, and could be in the "comparative thought" section-and in rhyme instead of verse. Love it, a great fav... Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:41:00 PM I'm indeed honoured and deeply humbled by your honest and kind appreciation.. I highly value your generosity and humility.. you elevate souls and illuminate minds.. thank you so much, Robert.. a great pleasure to write a work that can meet your new form poetry.. my deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Paul Callus Date: 5/19/2019 3:37:00 AM Awww I can certainly relate to these words of yours, Besma! Luckily for me the pressure of time consuming exams is now behind me, yet I miss those days, somewhat! A clap of encouragement to you and all dedicated teachers! Keep up the good work. Your monorhyme is enjoyable. ~ Enjoy the weekend (unless you too tend to take your work home!) #Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:34:00 PM Indeed, teaching is consuming heart and mind.. the only solace is the love we have to this vocation and also the pleasure of giving.. and surely this resonates with you, dear colleague.. thank you so much, Paul for honouring me and my humble work with your visit and highly valued words.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/18/2019 4:29:00 PM you surely know the fine musicality which makes a poem appealing, besma... much delighted... huggs Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:29:00 PM Dear Nette, Your kind words and praise fill my heart with bliss.. and I feel blessed to have such a beautiful soul here on my page reading and appreciating my humble work.. thank you so much, Love and hugs.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 5/18/2019 3:11:00 PM Wonderfully said Besma Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:25:00 PM Thank you so much, Allen for your visit and appreciative feedback.. Best regards.

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2019 12:19:00 PM Every line resonates in rhythm and excels in flow and tone..such a beautiful write Besma. I enjoyed the tunes that sing of the teacher's pen. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/21/2019 5:24:00 PM You bring to life a work of art by your genuine and generous feedback, dear Vijay.. I'm deeply grateful for your continuous support and encouragement.. always a great pleasure to read your rewarding appreciations.. my deepest regards.. stay blessed always.