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My Soul Has a Yearning

My soul has a yearning I dare not speak aloud The earth forever turning But my wants I am not allowed There are things for which I ache From the depths of my heart Things I ponder daily But I cannot take part My soul has a yearning I fear I will never know But I go right on wanting I cannot seem to let go

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/25/2013 9:53:00 AM

A fellow "rhymer", I see! How lovely! I will enjoy perusing through your pieces. I see a likeness in our styles and expressions. My only real critique would be to iron out the rhythm and beats a bit, but trust me, a few off beats to not detract from the beauty of the piece :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/28/2013 5:58:00 AM

should say * do not detract

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/18/2013 7:46:00 PM

Lovely work April.Keep up the fine work my friend.

Donna Jones

Date: 8/16/2013 7:23:00 AM

Hello April....lovely poem..as Peter mentioned....with age comes this peace you yearn for in just appreciating one beautiful day at a time....you described life well here.enjoyed....

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2013 7:34:00 PM

there are things that will always remain a mystery...but the soul still yearns to know....nicely penned April

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/15/2013 2:42:00 PM

Its the way i feel..as if there s something always missing in my deepest of soul..I wonder how long will it take my yearn to be fulfillled.Your poems feel so real dear..Lovely

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/12/2013 11:45:00 AM

I know the feeling. good poem

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/9/2013 11:41:00 AM

Beautifully bold. If the yearn is so strong, just take that leap. Probably easier said than done. :) Nicely done!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/8/2013 9:43:00 PM

A lovely poem, April. Flows smoothly and rhymes well. Love, Kim