My Soul Cried Out

Open the door LORD.
I have only cheated once.
LORD, please let me in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 3:38 PM
Mr. Brown, that's all it takes not to get in if we don't repent....but on the lighter side I hear ya! Luv Joy (Jew)
Falotico Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Excellent write and lots of feelings. Thank you so much for taking time to check out my work. Michael
Tideswell Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Hi Earl, congrats on your win with this visual senryu ~ Sharon :)
Amuni Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:05 AM
I love this. Adeola Yusuf Amuni
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 8:26 PM
This one kind of made me laugh. That means I really liked it!! LUv, Andrea and congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 4:53 PM
Congrats on the win, Earle
Johnson Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Copngratulations LEarle on this great Haiku and win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Yes we must learn love precept to enter the door. However, mercy is provided outside the door for slow learners. Smile! Thank God!!!Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations Earle on your win in Linda-Marie Bariana's contest "Soul Speaks Senryu". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:54 AM
much enjoyed, congrats on win, Francine
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Congrats Earle on your fourth place win in my Soup Speaks contest.. wonderful words.. thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors.. with luv..
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:40 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
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