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Beautiful bright sunset on a tropical paradise beach Wall Mural ...

Oh there is one place that dwells deep within It warms up the sun as each new day begins It's a wellspring of essence, the aspect of id All things that have guided since I was a kid From deep, shines that spirit, alit as the day With a noonday sun luster to fluster the fray My feet on its path from sunup's first spark Still it scatters a shadow, a comfort of dark It sees me thru day as sun 'cross the vault It shelters thru darkest of storms to a fault It lets heaven weep to give hope and inspire And thru winter's cold I stay warm by its fire But this life is precious because it thus ends Like lovers and lullabies and childhood friends Each day's filled with glory, adventure and light Yet moonlight and stars only shine in the night Someday all my stories will dance on the sky And color each sunset as evening draws nigh When, like the day dying to set the gloam free My soul, as those sunsets, slips into the sea. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice 3, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice (3) Any Theme Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Slipping Soul Sunsets Into The Sea" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/5/2020 5:56:00 PM
Truly enjoyed revisiting this one today, Greg. "The wellspring of essence". Please include this in your next (first?) poetry book and send me the link to buy it... I'll be first in line. Congrats on another top win, my friend, a Fave. ~ John
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Date: 9/5/2020 6:48:00 AM
You have achieved a nice cadence and lovely rhythm along with great rhyme...a true 1st place winner, congrats!
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Date: 4/27/2020 6:35:00 AM
A truly spectacular piece my friend. Every verse perfectly formed and placed. Closing stanza icing on the delicious cake. A fav.. a true beauty....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:00:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Sir Roberto - thank you, my friend! :o)
Date: 4/26/2020 6:50:00 PM
The sun in its arc across the vault of heaven as an allegory for life. Masterfully handled, Bard. Congrats on your win! ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thank you once again for noticing the subtle-yet-important elements, John - you are very perceptive and sensitive, and it is much appreciated! Blessings! :o)
Date: 4/26/2020 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement with this stunning beauty Greg! xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:59:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Connie, and it means so much - thank you! :o) <3
Date: 4/26/2020 10:28:00 AM
Another masterful write G, looks and reads like another winner IMHO!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:59:00 PM
Ha! Thanks so much, John - my good luck charm! :o)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/28/2020 1:43:00 PM
Told ya, congrats on another win!
Date: 4/26/2020 8:46:00 AM
Yes, my friend...You've gone tropical...like an Island boy... I can imagine if you had the opportunity to experience it daily, what great poetry you would write
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Arturo - I lived in St Croix at one time, (US Virgin Islands) and plan to return to the tropics someday, (South Pacific, I hope) ... blessings, my friend! :o)

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