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Beautiful bright sunset on a tropical paradise beach Wall Mural ...

o there is a place that dwells deep within it makes warm the sun as new days begin wellspring of essence that found me beguiled each wondrous footstep I took since a child deep shines that spirit, alight as the day noonday bright luster to fluster the fray two feet on my path from sunup's first spark scattering shadows to burnish the dark it sees me thru day as sun 'cross the vault shelters thru darkness and fear, to a fault it lets heaven’s weep give life and inspire and thru winter's cold, I warm by its fire but … like lovers in moonlight, stories and friends life stays so precious cuz one day … it ends daytime is joyous, drenched sweet by the sun yet … moon and stars only beam when it’s done I pray that one day my words dance on the sky staining each sunset when evening draws nigh when, like day dying to set twilight free … my soul, with the sun, slips into the sea. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice 3, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice (3) Any Theme Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Slipping Soul Sunsets Into The Sea" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/5/2020 5:56:00 PM
Truly enjoyed revisiting this one today, Greg. "The wellspring of essence". Please include this in your next (first?) poetry book and send me the link to buy it... I'll be first in line. Congrats on another top win, my friend, a Fave. ~ John
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Date: 9/5/2020 6:48:00 AM
You have achieved a nice cadence and lovely rhythm along with great rhyme...a true 1st place winner, congrats!
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Date: 4/27/2020 6:35:00 AM
A truly spectacular piece my friend. Every verse perfectly formed and placed. Closing stanza icing on the delicious cake. A fav.. a true beauty....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:00:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Sir Roberto - thank you, my friend! :o)
Date: 4/26/2020 6:50:00 PM
The sun in its arc across the vault of heaven as an allegory for life. Masterfully handled, Bard. Congrats on your win! ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thank you once again for noticing the subtle-yet-important elements, John - you are very perceptive and sensitive, and it is much appreciated! Blessings! :o)
Date: 4/26/2020 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement with this stunning beauty Greg! xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:59:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Connie, and it means so much - thank you! :o) <3
Date: 4/26/2020 10:28:00 AM
Another masterful write G, looks and reads like another winner IMHO!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:59:00 PM
Ha! Thanks so much, John - my good luck charm! :o)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/28/2020 1:43:00 PM
Told ya, congrats on another win!
Date: 4/26/2020 8:46:00 AM
Yes, my friend...You've gone tropical...like an Island boy... I can imagine if you had the opportunity to experience it daily, what great poetry you would write
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Arturo - I lived in St Croix at one time, (US Virgin Islands) and plan to return to the tropics someday, (South Pacific, I hope) ... blessings, my friend! :o)

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