Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

My Son's Check-Up

My son went for a checkup, wound up in emerge
Docs were alerted, thought he might be on the verge
He's only fifty-two
Has a stressful job beaucoup
Tests proved negative but caution should be urged

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Darlene De Beaulieu August 3, 2019 at 5:19 PM Hello happy jack, some jobs are very stressful for some people. to handle. Have a nice evening my friend. Jack Ellison August 3, 2019 at 5:35 PM What's stressful for some isn't for others! He really enjoys what he does! He's VP of a large advertising firm!!! Thanks, Darlene! Love, Happy Jack XOX

Tom Cunningham August 3, 2019 at 1:32 PM Maureens right , no job is worth your health, lifestyle change is a must though, next warning might be fatal, god forbid. Jack Ellison August 3, 2019 at 1:52 PM Sweet Mo is a sharp cookie!!! Is she listening? Scottie's such a happy-go-lucky guy! Methinks he got the message though!!!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 3, 2019 at 8:49 AM Yikes! No job is worth your health (she says, a worn and wery retired bike messenger) ;), xomo! Jack Ellison August 3, 2019 at 9:30 AM One never knows... scary! Here I am, 84 next week and still cookin'! Initial results turn out to be a scare and to lose some weight... he's way overweight!!! A wakeup call! XOX