My Song of Love

My song of love..... Listen to my song that I have written for you This song comes from bottom of my heart for you It will tell you how much you are mean to me and how much I love and care for you my love Read my song that I have written for you This song comes far away from me for you It will tell you my days are not enough to love you and how much you will feel for me, my love Sing my song that I have written for you This song comes in the air for you It will make you feel my love thirst on you and how much I need to be closed to you my love Oh, my song of love, show me the way to reach my love without crying rain tells me it has been in vain. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved
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November 27, 2013 at 1:47 AM
Ravi, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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November 27, 2013 at 10:16 PM
You are always welcome madam. Appreciated your comment. Happy Thanksgiving. - Love Ravi
Hamilton Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Ravi hi this is a beautiful declaration of love kudos Shadow x smile
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 2:03 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Horsman Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 8:45 AM
I too love this Ravi,,,,.
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September 7, 2013 at 11:19 PM
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Gasun Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:46 AM
So beautiful and so sweet poem and song this is my dear friend Ravi. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed weekend! love lots, Leonora
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September 7, 2013 at 11:19 PM
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September 4, 2013 at 5:42 PM
Ravi, a lovely write, heartfelt song you sing. . Love ~SKAT~
Sathasivam Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:20 PM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
A   Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 5:53 PM
it is a lovely song Ravi, sad and deep....xox~ Linda
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September 7, 2013 at 11:20 PM
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September 2, 2013 at 9:10 AM
a beautiful love song this is, Ravi. Luv, Andrea
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September 7, 2013 at 11:21 PM
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Mehta Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 5:48 AM
Beautiful expressions of yearning. You could turn this into nice sonnet
Sathasivam Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:21 PM
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September 2, 2013 at 5:42 AM
Some loves in life are not meant to be..Enjoyed reading your expressions about the topic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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September 7, 2013 at 11:21 PM
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September 2, 2013 at 5:23 AM
- Ravi my friend .... Thanks for this really BEAUTIFUL poem !!!! - Love it from the top to the bottom!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 2, 2013 at 5:27 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs
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