My Son

I saw; asked why you were crying, 
you said nothing; in pain from the
walk from your school.  I let that 
one pass.  While silence entertained 
use I saw; asked why you cry.  
Nothing you said again.

I heard; walked in your room, asked 
why are you crying, you said nothing.
I listened at your door, muffled 
whimpers’, echoed throughout the 
house, sadness in a little boys heart.

I fell, lying on the floor, I saw you and
heard you call 911.  Now I know why 
you cry.  It is hard to watch someone 
you love slowly fade.  However, you 
were strong, taking control.  

I saw, as I lay in bed, your smile,  
there were no more tears.  I almost 
forgot how you looked happy. Relieved 
that the sadness was no more.

I heard your laughter; in the silence of 
the night, it was just silence.  A peaceful 
ending to a day without tears.  Saved 
from my submission to the end.

I stand to walk; blessed to have had you as 
my son, glad that you took charge when I 
was unable to see and hear my life circling 
the drain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Thank you for presenting us with more of your poetry to read today Arnold. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Wow....this is a sad and powerful poem, but rich with honesty and gratitude for the strength of your son. Best wishes to you both! Love, Carrie
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