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Father and son never saw eye to eye, too much jealousy on the patriarch side 
He constantly put his son down for everything he did, competing incessantly
One day the son had enough and walked away, there was nothing else to do 
Father and son reunion 
you can't peel an onion 
without crying a few tears 
Ten long years passed with neither one saying a word to each other. 
Then one day he found a loving woman who opened his heart, he forgave. 
They re-connected only to find out his father had left him out of the will 
Anger is a monster 
wearing a holster 
with a loaded gun 
Abuse kept creeping in just like the old days.  Verbal abuse returned  
Then the day came when Father got sick and he drove him to the hospital 
Son tried to make amends and tell his dad he loved him, he was rebuked  
Death can devour ego 
and teach you to let go 
or pride can win 
"Get out"  he screamed to his son at his death bed. Adam was left, broken.  
It takes years to come to terms with abuse, He died November last year 
An empath at heart he cries at the drop of a hat. Most gentle man I ever met

I should know, he is my future son in law and I am proud of him. 

Contest Name	Ego shorn, here now reborn | Enter Contest
Deadline	7/28/2022 12:00:00 AM
Ego shorn, here now reborn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 7/24/2022 3:22:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write/story. Sorry for all of the pain. Life is filled with pain. Blessings and hugs going your way...................
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