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My Smiles And Frowns

In summer's Nature reign My soft heart burns To frolic on the beach, nearly naked But when winter storms with its bitter touch All smiles shivers Snowflake's bang Makes it Worst By: Joseph Osita Michael J Flaticho's contest: "Smiles and Frown"

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Date: 7/22/2011 10:54:00 AM
Joey, you captured the joys of summer and the strife of winter so well in your poem. (I actually prefer winter because Florida has 9 months of summer heat and I miss the snow.) I'm sure this will do well in Michael's contest! Winning wishes coming your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/22/2011 7:30:00 AM
I totally agree with you. I adore summer and detest winter. Great contrast poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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