Premiere Contest WinnerMy Small Bit of Forest

The colorant of dawn, the cardinal sees,
intoning its hues with, “pretty...pretty...pretty.”

As I covet red feathers, in the teaberry tree,
the sunlit chickadee harmonizes, “hey sweetie.”

The woodpecker like a heckler is pining for laughs -
pounding, drumming the marionette for gaffs.

A tufted titmouse tweets, “peter...peter...peter.”
The goldfinch dines on dandelion seeds, lilting sweeter.

Outfitted with winsome wildlife, comfortable and commodious,
my small bit of forest resonates with songbirds, melodious.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Delightful Kim: Very worthy of the Gold Medal win. SuZ
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March 11, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Suzanne!
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February 25, 2019 at 10:28 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Kim. Bravo.
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February 26, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Line! :)
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February 23, 2019 at 11:42 AM
I felt like I was Snow White dancing around while the birds sang and the little critters jumped around engulfed in this merriment! This is so inspirational and spirit lifting! It is a really feel good poem. Did I mention that I love it? Oh! And a big congratulations on your win!
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February 23, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Thanks so much, Sherilynn!
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February 22, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Wonderful songful poem! Congratulations on your top win Kim! xomo :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 5:10 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
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February 21, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Beautiful pastoral poem, Kim! Your word tapestry sings with dove wings of joyous elevation. You're such a talented poetess. I love this poem ... it's an instant fave. Love and more love always (LAMLA.)
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February 21, 2019 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much, Freddie! Your words mean much from such a talented writer! <3 Kim
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February 21, 2019 at 2:56 AM
I can hear the birds singing praises to the Creator thru your poem. Congrats. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Beata! <3 Kim
Hamilton Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Nice win Kim, enjoyed...congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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February 20, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Thank you, John!
Dutta Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:18 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, sweet Anisha!
Mitra Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 7:29 PM
The opening lines are too good.. the poem an excellent one... I could almost understand the language of the songbirds thru your words Kim. A big congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Debjani! Hugs...Kim
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February 20, 2019 at 4:20 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Kim. Janice
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February 20, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Thank you, Janice!
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February 20, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Kim I loved the imagery in your poem and I could hear the birds you described, congratulations on your first place win!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 4:01 PM
So excited! Thank you for the win!
May Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Beautiful write Kim...Congrats on your top win..
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February 20, 2019 at 4:49 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
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February 20, 2019 at 2:45 PM
precious! congratulations on your trophy win!
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February 20, 2019 at 4:49 PM
Thank you, P.S.!
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February 20, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Wow!! Beautiful, Kim, you are brilliant with words .. Congratulations on you very well deserved win. Not to many contest I enter because of not knowing what to say. Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thank you, Eve!
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February 20, 2019 at 12:14 PM
Back with congrats Kim Tom.
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February 20, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thank you, Tom!
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February 19, 2019 at 8:15 AM
The chorus of the song birds reminds me of spring and approaching summer days. Tom.
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February 19, 2019 at 9:15 AM
So much the sweeter, my friend! Come,Spring!
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