My Small Bit of Forest Premiere Contest Winner

The colorant of dawn, the cardinal sees,
intoning its hues with, “pretty...pretty...pretty.”

As I covet red feathers, in the teaberry tree,
the sunlit chickadee harmonizes, “hey sweetie.”

The woodpecker like a heckler is pining for laughs -
pounding, drumming the marionette for gaffs.

A tufted titmouse tweets, “peter...peter...peter.”
The goldfinch dines on dandelion seeds, lilting sweeter.

Outfitted with winsome wildlife, comfortable and commodious,
my small bit of forest resonates with songbirds, melodious.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/10/2019 9:03:00 PM
Delightful Kim: Very worthy of the Gold Medal win. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne!
Date: 2/25/2019 10:28:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Kim. Bravo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Line! :)
Date: 2/23/2019 11:42:00 AM
I felt like I was Snow White dancing around while the birds sang and the little critters jumped around engulfed in this merriment! This is so inspirational and spirit lifting! It is a really feel good poem. Did I mention that I love it? Oh! And a big congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sherilynn!
Date: 2/22/2019 3:41:00 PM
Wonderful songful poem! Congratulations on your top win Kim! xomo :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2019 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
Date: 2/21/2019 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful pastoral poem, Kim! Your word tapestry sings with dove wings of joyous elevation. You're such a talented poetess. I love this poem ... it's an instant fave. Love and more love always (LAMLA.)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2019 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Freddie! Your words mean much from such a talented writer! <3 Kim
Date: 2/21/2019 2:56:00 AM
I can hear the birds singing praises to the Creator thru your poem. Congrats. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Beata! <3 Kim
Date: 2/20/2019 9:34:00 PM
Nice win Kim, enjoyed...congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2019 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 9:49:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 2/20/2019 8:18:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Anisha!
Date: 2/20/2019 7:29:00 PM
The opening lines are too good.. the poem an excellent one... I could almost understand the language of the songbirds thru your words Kim. A big congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Debjani! Hugs...Kim
Date: 2/20/2019 4:20:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 2/20/2019 2:54:00 PM
Kim I loved the imagery in your poem and I could hear the birds you described, congratulations on your first place win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 4:01:00 PM
So excited! Thank you for the win!
Date: 2/20/2019 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful write Kim...Congrats on your top win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 2/20/2019 2:45:00 PM
precious! congratulations on your trophy win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you, P.S.!
Date: 2/20/2019 1:00:00 PM
Wow!! Beautiful, Kim, you are brilliant with words .. Congratulations on you very well deserved win. Not to many contest I enter because of not knowing what to say. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 2/20/2019 12:14:00 PM
Back with congrats Kim Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 2/19/2019 8:15:00 AM
The chorus of the song birds reminds me of spring and approaching summer days. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 9:15:00 AM
So much the sweeter, my friend! Come,Spring!
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