My Sleepless Nights

everything I strived for
I lost 
everything I loved 
I lost
cause she could only take so much
I give up on givin a f**k
because im lost
lord please take my life
its nobodies loss
I used to think she was right
until I learned 
everyday we'll fight
so now I move on
to a journey to find ms right
but before then
I don't wanna count
my sleepless nights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 28, 2014 at 3:23 PM
JOAQUIN , CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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January 5, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,
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January 3, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Joaquin, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
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December 25, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Hi JOAQUIN, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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December 24, 2013 at 2:10 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Joaquin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 24, 2013 at 12:41 AM
PS... I hope you enjoy the poetry site... May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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December 24, 2013 at 12:40 AM
Hello Joaquin, wow.. This is deep... And reminds me of my sleepless nights. Stopping by with A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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