My Sky

I intake oxygen 
from the green trees
by the deep breaths.....

I live under the sky
Where  thousands of star twinkle
like the blinking of sweet young ladies
telling you to love them.....

I expel carbon-di-oxide in the air
To make the trees green
To make the sky blue
And to make the ocean deep......

My sky is full of stars
twinkling like the blinking 
of sweet young ladies......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:15 PM
MOHAMMAD, Congratulations, In Giorgio's Impressing contest... Love ~ SKAT ~
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, mohammad
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 3:24 PM
this is so sweet. and now I remember I had loved it before as well. Congrats in Giorgio's contest.
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 3:06 PM
-Mohammad , congratulations on your fine winning poem X 2 in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 12:15 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Mohammad. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Impressive Mohammad, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win,mohammad
Kayode Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Congrats Abedin on the win . A brilliant one indeed.
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 6:25 PM
this is so precious. I Just love it!! a highest rating.
Abedin Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 8:31 PM
Thanks for your so sweet comments.
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