Greg Gaul Poet Rhyme

My Sky

My sky, as always, still the same
From where joyous lights surely came
I look up in awe and exclaim
When my whole world then turns to flame

Too much missaid, as I recall
Knowing this matters not at all
Some see my rise, then see my fall
Above all, sunshine should enthrall

Had hoped for enough to sustain
To be back here happy again
Makes no sense to ever complain
My sky shall stay, so I'll remain






12 lines  78 words  3 stanzas in monorhyme  5/8/22

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Vickey Rhymer May 8, 2022 at 1:57 PM I don't believe that liar chicken little either.Enjoyed your poem. Greg Gaul May 8, 2022 at 2:13 PM Vickey, the sky ain't fallin' for me. Thanks for the read and comment.

Paula Goldsmith May 8, 2022 at 12:45 PM Yes, "My sky, as always, still the same." A wonderful line and write. I love the sky by day/by night. Have a great/blessed~day/week writing away.......... Greg Gaul May 8, 2022 at 2:14 PM Let the sun forever shine on us Paula. Thanks for your visit.