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My Sky

My sky, as always, still the same From where joyous lights surely came I look up in awe and exclaim When my whole world then turns to flame Too much missaid, as I recall Knowing this matters not at all Some see my rise, then see my fall Above all, sunshine should enthrall Had hoped for enough to sustain To be back here happy again Makes no sense to ever complain My sky shall stay, so I'll remain 12 lines 78 words 3 stanzas in monorhyme 5/8/22

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Date: 5/8/2022 1:57:00 PM
I don't believe that liar chicken little either.Enjoyed your poem.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/8/2022 2:13:00 PM
Vickey, the sky ain't fallin' for me. Thanks for the read and comment.
Date: 5/8/2022 12:45:00 PM
Yes, "My sky, as always, still the same." A wonderful line and write. I love the sky by day/by night. Have a great/blessed~day/week writing away..........
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/8/2022 2:14:00 PM
Let the sun forever shine on us Paula. Thanks for your visit.

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