Sathya Babu Poet Than-Bauk

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I want to stay
slim, I say it
but stray and eat,
It's a treat to
give fete to my
taste bud's cry, I
can't lie this Love.


29-Nov-2020
Than-Bauk Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina
Form used as below
O. O. O. a
O. O. a. O
O. a. O. b
O. O. b. O
O. b. O. c
O. O. c. O
O. c. O. d

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Jan Allison December 7, 2020 at 2:28 PM well penned Sathya, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin December 7, 2020 at 4:31 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2020 at 5:15 AM Congrats on your placement in the contest. These are not so easy to write but you did an excellent job. Sara Sathya Babu December 5, 2020 at 6:34 AM Thanks a lot for these nice words, it means a lot. Yes I loved writing for this contest Regards, Sathya

Eve Roper December 4, 2020 at 2:52 PM Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve Sathya Babu December 5, 2020 at 1:59 AM Thanks a lot Eve. Regards, Sathya

Alexis Y. December 4, 2020 at 2:17 PM Hi Saytha, You did well. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Sathya Babu December 5, 2020 at 1:59 AM Thanks a lot Alexis Regards, Sathya

Charles Messina December 4, 2020 at 1:39 PM I love how you did this, Sathya. It would have placed 1st but it should have only been 3 lines total. This is well deserved of 2nd being that you took it to another level. Congratulations on your win..stay well. Regards, Charlie Sathya Babu December 5, 2020 at 1:58 AM Hi Charlie, I loved this contest, thanks for organizing this. Yes I got so immersed in the form that I forgot the 3 lines restriction you had set. Thanks again for the placement and opportunity Regards, Sathya