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Below is the poem entitled MY SISTER which was written by poet ABHISHEK A A. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Oh my sweet sister 
I'd never like to miss you
Even a single moment 
Oh my dear sister
You'll be always with me 
In my dreams,in my life
Oh my lovely sister
She cares me like a mother 
She consoles me when I'm sad
And she makes me laugh when I cry
Her voice is so sweet
It's sweeter than Nightingale
She smiles like virgin Mary
The symbol of peace
Oh god I'm thanking you
For giving me such a lovely sister 
Who motivates me to reach the heights 
Her presence develop confidence in me
And make me feel that I'm in heaven 
When I miss her 
I feel I'm in hell
Oh my sister
I'd like to be with you 
Till my death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 9/6/2017 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful Free Verse (that's what this is) tribute to your sister. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 9/6/2017 8:03:00 PM