"my Sister"

A dream from a while back I always remember clear...
My sister was slipping away from cancer as I tear...
Loosing my dad three years back was still fresh in my head...
So going through this again, all the same words can be said...
As I slept through the night images would fill my dreams...
My sister and family all chatting as all was ok it seemed...
The entire dream my sister stood by the door as I pleaded
her to sit and rest...
She kept saying I have to go as I wondered if this was a test...
She opens the door and starts to walk out as I stood to hold her
arm...
I'm ok she claimed as I could feel her pull away ,but with no harm..
It was my dad on the other side of the door saying she is with me now...
As I woke that morning I felt confused , the phone rang as my heart 
dropped...
My sister had passed away through the night, a destination that couldn't
be stopped...
But to know where she was and who was with her eased my pain a bit..
Still I miss her so as remember her smile as I sit and reflect...

A true dream... for" Fragmented Dream contest by Constance A Rambling Poet"
"a spiritual dream" by Michael J. Falotico

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/23/2010 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. OMG i got goose bumps, emotional n a faraway connection. People close to us or vice versa connect in an undefinable way..... i know it sounds funny to mention but i'd anyway...i am die hard MJ fan, and i often get a vision of him dressed in white with his hands wrapped to his chest , with a half smile and he's looking at me with peaceful eyes, this happens everytime i close my eyes n think of him. goose bumps again!
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Date: 9/12/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt dream or was it? Sometimes we think they are dreams but instead a message from beyond. Either way it sounds as if it eased your pain. Thank you for sharing, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 9/11/2010 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations Michael on your win in Constance ~A Rambling Poet's contest "A Fragmented Dream~~. Love Carol
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Date: 9/11/2010 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations with this touching write Michael, beautiful tribute to a special lady.. Luv Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:58:00 PM
very sad Michael, expressed wonderfully, congrats for this winner. Harry
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:39:00 PM
Congrats my White Knight on your big win in the Dream contest.. an awesome and touching write for a loved one so dear... enjoy a special win in her honor luv.. this happy weekend my friend..with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Michael
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Date: 9/5/2010 12:35:00 PM
I understand it all Michael.. my MOM died of cancer last Thanksgiving Day and it was awful but your poem is a tribute to your sister whom u luv... we miss them only to see them again soon.. this is a wonderful real entry for the contest...good luck luv..
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Date: 9/4/2010 9:52:00 AM
wonderfully written, touching dream, good luck in the contest with it
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:16:00 AM
Beautiful recollection of your sister and your dream, so vivid Michael, all the best for the contest.. Thanks for sharing your emotions with us.. luv Wilma
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michael for entering my contest, I appreciate the support~~
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:02:00 AM
enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/4/2010 6:28:00 AM
Michael, thank you for sharing your soul....I lost my Pop a few yrs. back, I enjoyed this much! jimbo
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Date: 9/4/2010 6:14:00 AM
The spirit let you know that she was okay...Great write that should be in the winners' circle for sure..Glad that I chose this one to read this morning..Sara
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