My Sister

My sister acts crazy.
She is very lazy.
She never reads books.
And is wants to be a cook.
She is a good person at school,
at home she is bad and cool.
Her name is Idil and she is
seven years old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 7:04 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 6:22 AM
Ikraan, welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
Christian Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 11:31 AM
a great poem most children get lazy LOL my little girl is the same and shes 11, shes not bad but shes lazy God bless from diane
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Praise the cook. She'll come around with a little encouragement. Keep writing.
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