My Shoes

My shoes.

My shoes in this life of mine.
Hard to bear in time.

So seemly short in size.
In their heat stink to the skies.

Walks in them around the block
In time I’d rather not clock.

Often hard on my sock.
Wish they were strong like rocks.

At times has feet feel like raw meat
No real treat to seek.

Toils shared they seem to care
As they soil in the wear.

Seems I care not for my shoes
Often wishing the more I should do.

When they soil from added age.
In the trash can will be their cage.

Because of those soles.
Who have worn the holes.

Finding them also as rot.
I'll weep for them not.

Such shoes soon forgot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Warrior Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Great couplet on shoes John...next should be hats lol...god bless...^WW^
Hardison Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Thanks Much for your comment. I not schooled in recognizing so many different types of poetry. Guess it shows. Rhyme and Narrative, Odes about it. Will try to add Couplet as one more. Peace, Love and Joy.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 9:24 AM
I sometimes get my shoes re soled if they are super comfortable.
Hardison Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Thanks much for your comment. Tried re-soling a pair of boots. Did not work out so well. Wearable but not as comfortable.
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