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My Secret Plight

Shadows shift in flickering flame
Vows made, now stained with your name
Our flame, once bold and bright
Now wanes upon this cold, stark night

I see the distance in your eyes
Reflecting echoes of love’s goodbye
Emptiness fills your silent stare
A longing still lingers in the air

Your heart, once gentle, has lost its grace
Betrayal bleeds—a bitter taste 
Sarcasm drips from lips once sweet
A soured promise, my heart retreats

Through veins of passion, ice takes hold
Your touch, once warm, now a numbing cold
Loneliness wraps around us tight
This silent suffering, my secret plight

Our flame that waltzed is now a wisp
A puff of smoke from a burnt-out wick
Haunted by love that burned too fast
Our fading ember, reduced to ash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Theraven Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:58 PM
Edward, So well in the deep distance the soul perceives. Through poker chip eyes which cannot hide. So enjoyed the last wisp of love's loss in this tale. Or rather familiar to a deceit I recognize. -Richard
Greenhough Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:07 PM
At least their feelings are mutual. I was very entertained by this tale. Thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 8:40 AM
A well constructed poem on love lost. Quite a popular subject foe poetry.
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