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My Secret Plight

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Shadows shift in flickering flame
Vows made, now stained with your name
Our flame, once bold and bright
Now wanes upon this cold, stark night

I see the distance in your eyes
Reflecting echoes of love’s goodbye
Emptiness fills your silent stare
A longing still lingers in the air

Your heart, once gentle, has lost its grace
Betrayal bleeds—a bitter taste 
Sarcasm drips from lips once sweet
A soured promise, my heart retreats

Through veins of passion, ice takes hold
Your touch, once warm, now a numbing cold
Loneliness wraps around us tight
This silent suffering, my secret plight

Our flame that waltzed is now a wisp
A puff of smoke from a burnt-out wick
Haunted by love that burned too fast
Our fading ember, reduced to ash

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Date: 8/17/2025 7:07:00 PM
At least their feelings are mutual. I was very entertained by this tale. Thanks.
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Date: 7/31/2025 8:40:00 AM
A well constructed poem on love lost. Quite a popular subject foe poetry.
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