My Sadness Sleeps

Who am I to cry
now that we have parted.
Given time pain will subside

Memories
of yesterday's dream
vanish.
An eminent huh 
surrounds my thoughts
and from this moment
I sleep alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 7:16 PM
This one too..is powerfully sad and poignant. Excellent writing, expresses such emotion and loss.....I'll be looking for other poems by you! Keep writing!! ...Best Wishes...Carrie
Hwilka Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Mike, I wrote this poem 30yrs ago when my wife and I divorced after 20yrs. It was hard when you love someone. But time does heal. I"m married now for 17yrs and very happy.
Jordan Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 6:50 AM
Tony - I feel for you because I have felt that pain several times over the course of my life - Hopefully one day you will become as lucky as I have regarding love - My prayers be with you and God bless
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