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My Saddest Christmas Ever

my saddest christmas ever has'nt came to be but in a very few days it will happen to me the presents i thought of will never be bought the gifts and decorations have all come to naught the love i wished to happen won't happen this christmas day because the one i loved the most has sadly passed away so i have yet to greive on that wonderful occasion no one will love me with such dedication my heart has need to give that special kind of love but with no one to give it to my heart it seems stopped up i can only imagin the fun we would have shared exchanging our silly presents showing how much we cared going out shopping will be a lonely task there won't be anyone there for me to share romance but still i'll spend this christmas with her on my mind i wish she were here we would have had a good time so this will surely be my saddest christmas ever will my saddness ever leave my heart keeps saying never

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Date: 12/21/2010 8:32:00 PM
very touching and moving. well put together and real.i can tell. i can tell by your words. T. S.
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Date: 12/8/2010 8:07:00 AM
Well, John if you ever read my letter to Santa, you would feel my pain. I really am not a scrooge, but~ bah humbug...lolI have no x- mass spirit right now,, I try not to anyways.. I don't know why it is gone, but it is. maybe it will hit when i realize x mass can get worst. SO, instead of healing when i got what i wanted for x- mass, i got withdrawn.. ,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:33:00 PM
wow - a touching and heartfelt poem! I sense the sadness, lonliness, dread and angst in having to spend your first season of joy without your recently passed love. You truly touched my heart with this sensational and will written rhyme. Good luck with your holiday and God bless. Joe
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:25:00 PM
I too lost my husband six years ago...on Valentine's day no less..it will get easier my friend...I promise :-) JB
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:08:00 PM
Dear John.The torment and pain that you've expressed move me.I'm so sorry for your loss.This must be a very difficult time for you.But I know you have Faith I hope it will give you the strength to get you through each day.I can't say I enjoyed this.How can I get pleasure from another's distress.I wiil say though I appreciate you as a poet and the way you have conveyed the truth of your emotions in this piece.Please, humbly I ask, sad as you,are try to keep your heart open to love. Love June (S)
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:40:00 PM
Good Luck if u enter in Constance's contest my friend...
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:40:00 PM
Very touching write John ..so very expressive of the emotion u are feeling right now toward the coming holiday.. but in spirit all are with us forever luv... happy weekend.. with luv.. enjoyed.. your creativity tonight...
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful job John. Yes a sad Christmas indeed, as I know of your loss. But joy will be renewed, as time passes. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:24:00 PM
I feel for you deeply. So sorry about your loss. My dad passed away during the Holidays and the shadows of sadness never vanish during these days. You need to think of the good times you had together and to know that one day you'll be together again in spirit. All the best, Iolanda
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Date: 11/19/2010 4:24:00 PM
Sorry for your loss.. I feel your pain..What about picking a needy family and help them this Christmas..I know she would love for you to do something like that.This reads like winner's circle for sure..Have a great evening..Sara
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:51:00 AM
I feel your sadness on this poem John, Christmas is always a sad season for me and I don't know why. I think exhaustion from retail. We work ourselves to hard. April would want you to go on with life and go out shopping and do the things you did. I know it is hard to find comfort in words but lots of us here do care. Phyl
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Date: 11/18/2010 3:56:00 PM
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Date: 11/18/2010 10:33:00 AM
Dear John, it is going to be a rough holiday for you this year. Remember that you have people who love you and want you to find the special happiness you had with April again. You are always in my prayers and in my heart. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:14:00 AM
heart-gripping, john... i'm a sucker for sad break-ups.. betting on this one for the contest.. compelling piece! warmest, nette
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