Connie Pachecho Poet Rictameter

My Rotting Teeth

my rotting teeth


i wish
upon a star
tooth fairy saves my teeth
two browns said goodbye in past year
with rotten cousins looking to join them
a mask of sharp pain and bad breath
i hide behind gum, pills
dentist, star bright?
i wish

connie pachecho

2/23/17

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Kim Merryman February 24, 2017 at 9:02 PM I can certainly relate to this. Going through some major dental work right now. Rotten teeth are not humorous, but your poem puts a humorous spin on a frustrating problem. Nicely done, Connie! Blessings, Kim

Daniel Turner February 24, 2017 at 11:07 AM You must brush, floss and gargle at least twice a day:) Funny but not funny if you have a toothache, Connie. As far as reading, the more you comment on other's poems you'll find most will reciprocate. Usually:) Just a suggestion:)

Connie Pachecho February 24, 2017 at 10:22 AM 4 hrs. ago i posted she rode her horse to conbuktoo. no views. all the post around me have views. how i receive that, i deleted the poem. it was a decent limerack,better than the ones ahead of me. Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 4:37 PM I agree with Dan, you really need to gaggle A LOT !