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My Rotting Teeth

my rotting teeth i wish upon a star tooth fairy saves my teeth two browns said goodbye in past year with rotten cousins looking to join them a mask of sharp pain and bad breath i hide behind gum, pills dentist, star bright? i wish connie pachecho 2/23/17

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/24/2017 9:02:00 PM

I can certainly relate to this. Going through some major dental work right now. Rotten teeth are not humorous, but your poem puts a humorous spin on a frustrating problem. Nicely done, Connie! Blessings, Kim

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/24/2017 11:07:00 AM

You must brush, floss and gargle at least twice a day:) Funny but not funny if you have a toothache, Connie. As far as reading, the more you comment on other's poems you'll find most will reciprocate. Usually:) Just a suggestion:)

Connie Pachecho

Date: 2/24/2017 10:22:00 AM

4 hrs. ago i posted she rode her horse to conbuktoo. no views. all the post around me have views. how i receive that, i deleted the poem. it was a decent limerack,better than the ones ahead of me.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 3/7/2017 4:37:00 PM

I agree with Dan, you really need to gaggle A LOT !