Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

My Rose

Like blowing a kiss 
from my open palm to you 
Catching it in mid air 
Holding it in my mind's eye 

The colour of passion 
satin petals falling outward 
Opening it's velvety silken heart 
Blushing petals in beauty picture perfect 

Falling down your stem 
above the thorns 
Sitting regally crowned 
On the air's heavenly scent 

In my eyes 
You are my candy 
In the morning dew upon you 
like crystal teardrops 
falling to the ground 

When the sun smiles at you 
kissing you with a beautiful rays 
Sparkling your divine beauty 
Scarlet red blushing 

You sit in your high heaven's 
with silken petals 
they say it all 
Kissed by your heavenly aroma 
Crowned the queen 
my red rose

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Kelly Deschler September 1, 2013 at 3:05 PM I can see why this poem won first place in a competition! The vivid imagery makes the reader actually smell the "heavenly aroma" of the roses. Amazing poetry!....Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem, "The Shy Rose". Yes, not all of my poems are dark, sad and dreary! :) Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2013 at 4:52 AM OH THE SOFT SIDE OF YOU THIS I MUST SEE

Charmaine Chircop August 31, 2013 at 7:14 AM It wins first in my favourites too Liam..You are very talented and writes passion so well...Awesome! and tnks for stopping by my poem : ) Charma Charmaine Chircop August 31, 2013 at 8:01 AM It would be lovely to.read a poem from a father to a daughter..Nothimg more beautiful..good day and tnks for honouring me with your beautiful lavender poem once again : ) Liam Mcdaid August 31, 2013 at 7:23 AM i will post tomorrow another first prize poem i wrote for my beautiful daughter thank you deeply for the sweet and beautiful comment i left you a little lavender i wrote last night