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My Rory and Me With Our Thoughts

Here am I sitting on the grassy hilltop with Rory always my buddy at my side enjoy my packed sandwich cheese and ham Rory's hoping for a bite so likes to confide Your dog can read your line of thought Rory even knows the moving of my lips there's a telepathy between the two of us especially when he's thirsty for water he sips Looking away above the clouds following the line of my kite thinking what if that was me up there except when it was dark at night To be in the clouds looking down seeing all the beauty all around travelling east and west forever in flight listening to the birds chirping sweet sounds But eventually we'd have to come down the body needs food especially my buddy so better to enjoy it up here when we can airs so fresh leaves skin somewhat ruddy! (This is taken from a picture, a fictional story of me and my dog Rory sitting on a hilltop thinking our thoughts.)

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Date: 8/10/2020 4:39:00 PM
G'day Gordon ... I enjoy little more than a pleasant rhyming verse best. (although I quite like many other forms also) But to be alone with your best mate contemplating makes a lovely scene - thanks Gordon - Lindsay
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/11/2020 12:32:00 AM
G'day Lindsay, Glad you liked this one and trust you are well.Have a blessed day, Gordon
Date: 8/9/2020 3:27:00 PM
Hello Gordon McConnell, I have enjoyed this poem. You had an enjoyable time with your dog. He sounds so cute. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2020 11:44:00 AM
Hello Gordon, you made this up! Well you did very well. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/9/2020 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, So glad you enjoyed my piece but it was a fictional piece even the dog was made up! Hope you're well, Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 8/9/2020 2:47:00 PM
A lovely verse about mans best friend and no better place to be than the great outdoors, Hope you're weekend went well and that the good weather continues. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/9/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Tom, Glad you enjoyed this piece, the weekends been great with loads of sunshine ??. Have a blessed week, Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 8/9/2020 2:13:00 PM
This is such a lovely, appealing, descriptive poem. ENJOYED! Janice
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/9/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Janice, So glad you enjoyed my piece so very much, I so enjoyed writing it as it brought back many happy memories of having a dog like Rory being brought up in the country. Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 8/9/2020 2:06:00 PM
Rory sounds like a splendid friend, especially on those outdoor outings, and I love his name. What breed is he, and how long have you had him? Great creative write my friend, enjoyed very much. Have a great week!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/9/2020 2:12:00 PM
Thanks John, first of all Rory is a fictional dog too taken from the picture but he looks like a collie type dog. Glad you enjoyed it and hope you have a great week too, I've been hearing such bad reports of the pandemic from your side of U.S. Take care, Blessings always,Gordon

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