Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Tanka

My Rocking Chair View

My Rocking Chair View
35 hundred feet high
Above the valley
Church steeples peak through the fog
From an invisible Town

As the Sun rises
A Picture post card appears
Miniature  Houses
Dotting the Landscape below
Quite a scenic view

Killington Mountain
Smiles down at me from afar
My Bigger Brother
Groomed for a season of snow
This is my Rocking Chair View

Inspired by the Contest “ the view - a tanka “
Sponsored By Francine Roberts
 
By HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Written : September 17th (12:50 A.M.,2011)

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Francine Roberts September 17, 2011 at 10:37 AM HG you only have 4 lines in the second stanza, needs 5 for a tanka