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My Robin

I looked out to a morning new A cloudy dull affair, Brightened some by dewdrops That sparkled here and there. Then from the gloom, a robin He alighted on a tree. A charming little fellow, Who brought a smile to me. Though the morn was dull He sang a cheery tune, My robin, he enchanted me And chased away the gloom. He cocked his little head He looked, then flew away. I asked myself, was he aware He'd brightened up my day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/22/2017 4:06:00 PM
I love this special poem about a Robin visit. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/22/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Heidi I mean :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/22/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thank Heidi :)
Date: 2/22/2017 3:37:00 PM
A sweet poem, so much so to brighten my day too :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/22/2017 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 2/22/2017 2:31:00 PM
I believe he was aware. This is marvelous poetry. You grace us with elegance and a fine moment. Well done
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/22/2017 2:51:00 PM
How kind, thank you Lisa :)
Date: 2/22/2017 2:30:00 PM
Such a happy good feeling poem Gary that made me smile.
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/22/2017 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Chris, our resident robin is there every morning waiting for his treat, always a nice way to start the day :)

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