My River

Mud up to my knees        Fighting the current       Around the bend again                     For Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Comporozos Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 2:29 AM
Another piece of surprise
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:29 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" Richard !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ferry Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Thanks Anne
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:53 PM
I remember this and liking it the first time I saw it. Congrats round the bend again.
Ferry Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Here we go round.......
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations Richard. Nice Haiku.
Sietesantos Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations, Richard on a fine win! Excellent Haiku. Pandita
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Richard:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:16 AM
Visiting back to congratulate you, richard
A   Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Richard, Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 5:09 PM
I can envision you going on and on around each bend after another!!
Ferry Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 3:21 PM
bend not benders .....right
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Quite allegorical write, richard
Ferry Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 8:02 AM
For me ...More of a life struggle than spiritual....Good to hear from you Dr. Ram//Hope all is well....Rick
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:41 PM
- Great haiku, Richard - Luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ferry Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:50 PM
thanks Anne
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:33 PM
Good haiku - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan looks like the formatting playing up again:-(
Ferry Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:34 PM
thanks
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