My River

Mud up to my knees Fighting the current Around the bend again For Contest

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 1/3/2015 2:29:00 AM

Another piece of surprise

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 4:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" Richard !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry
Date: 9/7/2014 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Anne

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 10:53:00 PM

I remember this and liking it the first time I saw it. Congrats round the bend again.

Richard Ferry
Date: 9/7/2014 10:40:00 AM

Here we go round.......

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations Richard. Nice Haiku.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations, Richard on a fine win! Excellent Haiku. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 7:05:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Richard:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2014 5:16:00 AM

Visiting back to congratulate you, richard

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:26:00 PM

Richard, Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 5:09:00 PM

I can envision you going on and on around each bend after another!!

Richard Ferry
Date: 8/31/2014 3:21:00 PM

bend not benders .....right

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 7:52:00 AM

Quite allegorical write, richard

Richard Ferry
Date: 8/27/2014 8:02:00 AM

For me ...More of a life struggle than spiritual....Good to hear from you Dr. Ram//Hope all is well....Rick

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2014 12:41:00 PM

- Great haiku, Richard - Luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry
Date: 8/26/2014 12:50:00 PM

thanks Anne

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 12:33:00 PM

Good haiku - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan looks like the formatting playing up again:-(

Richard Ferry
Date: 8/26/2014 12:34:00 PM

thanks