My Reverie Song

i rest upon sandy shores amidst a reverie, 
     i feel the subtleness of pebbles  
             along the coast of a tender sea-
tides with transcending comfort 
in the breeze showers sympathy,
         with my tender soul at ease-
for the trees embrace what i cannot see

a lovely day with skies of blue, 
the dulcet moon wears his reflection;
i sense you see the majesty too,
feel the felicity of nature's affection-
when the ebb flow of life shines through,
i need your  to flow... 
                               just ME and YOU

so serene and clean,
feathers floating down the stream-
so natural,
                like a remembered dream; 
i count the clouds as they drift and gleam
my lungs fill with the freshness of air,
as i inhale a picture-perfect scene
                           (a painting so rare)
i share a ripple with a lily pad, green- 
pairing barren willows whispering,
“feel me in the ambiance of tides,
               where the purity of nature abides”

forever is not too long, 
    and my love is not too strong-
i needed your tune along...
                         my beloved reverie song





March 24, 2017
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Watt Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Just beautiful, Lu Loo. I love the lines “feel me in the ambiance of tides / where the purity of nature abides”. Your imagery puts me right there, I can almost feel the fresh sea air in my lungs. Congrats ~ John
Calasibetta Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 11:55 AM
How delightful!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Lovely, Luloo!
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Nice tribute to our dear mother nature. A 7, no doubt.
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