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My Reverie Song

i rest upon sandy shores amidst a reverie, i feel the subtleness of pebbles along the coast of a tender sea- tides with transcending comfort in the breeze showers sympathy, with my tender soul at ease- for the trees embrace what i cannot see a lovely day with skies of blue, the dulcet moon wears his reflection; i sense you see the majesty too, feel the felicity of nature's affection- when the ebb flow of life shines through, i need your to flow... just ME and YOU so serene and clean, feathers floating down the stream- so natural, like a remembered dream; i count the clouds as they drift and gleam my lungs fill with the freshness of air, as i inhale a picture-perfect scene (a painting so rare) i share a ripple with a lily pad, green- pairing barren willows whispering, “feel me in the ambiance of tides, where the purity of nature abides” forever is not too long, and my love is not too strong- i needed your tune along... my beloved reverie song March 24, 2017

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Date: 2/8/2020 9:37:00 PM
Just beautiful, Lu Loo. I love the lines “feel me in the ambiance of tides / where the purity of nature abides”. Your imagery puts me right there, I can almost feel the fresh sea air in my lungs. Congrats ~ John
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Date: 3/25/2017 11:55:00 AM
How delightful!
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Date: 3/24/2017 1:54:00 PM
Lovely, Luloo!
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Date: 3/24/2017 11:52:00 AM
Nice tribute to our dear mother nature. A 7, no doubt.
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