Jenna Logan Poet Senryu

My Restless Soul

floating on waves
my boat anchored in the bay
sunlight growing dim

to my restless soul
the sea played a lullaby
I joined in the song

reflecting on life
I suddenly felt serene
content with nature

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FJ Thomas February 1, 2023 at 3:47 PM How soft and relaxing. This is lovely Jenna Jenna Logan February 2, 2023 at 2:38 PM I'm glad you found it so. Thank you, Flo.

Michael Tor January 18, 2023 at 11:25 AM One with nature is the best feeling ever. The serenity of it all is priceless. Thanks for sharing Jenna... Jenna Logan February 2, 2023 at 2:37 PM If only those moments would last. Thank you for your thoughts, Michael.

Caren Krutsinger January 18, 2023 at 2:38 AM To feel contentment, that is the top of the mark, Jenna. Jenna Logan February 2, 2023 at 2:36 PM It should be, Caren, but too often life gets in the way.

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2023 at 9:25 AM Ahh!! That could put one to sleep(the situation). Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Jenna Logan February 2, 2023 at 2:36 PM Thank you, Sara.

Mark Koplin January 14, 2023 at 3:55 AM I'm still trying to capture this feeling in my life. I'm glad others already have, beautifully written. Jenna Logan January 14, 2023 at 5:50 AM I think you have it at times. Fishing is one way you may be enjoying peaceful moments. Playing with your pups... Realizing we're still on the earth and not inside it... Thank you, Mark.

John Lawless January 10, 2023 at 6:18 AM Jenna, I call those my "kayak" moments..just adrift on a gentle moment Jenna Logan January 10, 2023 at 6:35 AM That's a nice thought. I think I'd need a little bit of a larger vessel to feel serene. Thanks for the comments, John.

Charles Messina January 10, 2023 at 4:56 AM So peaceful a moment. Wonderful write, Jenna. :) Charlie Jenna Logan January 10, 2023 at 6:35 AM Thank you very much, Charlie.

Tom Cunningham January 9, 2023 at 11:56 PM And what a great feeling it is too Jenna, being at total peace with the world. Tom Jenna Logan January 10, 2023 at 6:34 AM Have you ever just lie upon the ground and watch the clouds float overhead? That experience makes me feel the same way. Thanks, Tom.

Joanna Daniel January 9, 2023 at 11:21 PM Beautiful sets of senryus, Jenna Jenna Logan January 10, 2023 at 6:34 AM Thanks a lot, Jo.

Arlo Parker January 9, 2023 at 1:56 PM Splendid trilogy, JL. I am there... ;o] Jenna Logan January 10, 2023 at 6:33 AM Thanks, AP. Relax and stay awhile.

Constance La France January 9, 2023 at 1:07 PM Jenna, beautiful, your poem made me serene, well done, Constance Jenna Logan January 10, 2023 at 6:33 AM Thanks, Constance. I'm glad it brought you a feeling of serenity.