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My Restless Soul

floating on waves my boat anchored in the bay sunlight growing dim to my restless soul the sea played a lullaby I joined in the song reflecting on life I suddenly felt serene content with nature

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Date: 2/1/2023 3:47:00 PM
How soft and relaxing. This is lovely Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/2/2023 2:38:00 PM
I'm glad you found it so. Thank you, Flo.
Date: 1/18/2023 11:25:00 AM
One with nature is the best feeling ever. The serenity of it all is priceless. Thanks for sharing Jenna...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/2/2023 2:37:00 PM
If only those moments would last. Thank you for your thoughts, Michael.
Date: 1/18/2023 2:38:00 AM
To feel contentment, that is the top of the mark, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/2/2023 2:36:00 PM
It should be, Caren, but too often life gets in the way.
Date: 1/17/2023 9:25:00 AM
Ahh!! That could put one to sleep(the situation). Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/2/2023 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 1/14/2023 3:55:00 AM
I'm still trying to capture this feeling in my life. I'm glad others already have, beautifully written.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2023 5:50:00 AM
I think you have it at times. Fishing is one way you may be enjoying peaceful moments. Playing with your pups... Realizing we're still on the earth and not inside it... Thank you, Mark.
Date: 1/10/2023 6:18:00 AM
Jenna, I call those my "kayak" moments..just adrift on a gentle moment
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2023 6:35:00 AM
That's a nice thought. I think I'd need a little bit of a larger vessel to feel serene. Thanks for the comments, John.
Date: 1/10/2023 4:56:00 AM
So peaceful a moment. Wonderful write, Jenna. :) Charlie
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2023 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie.
Date: 1/9/2023 11:56:00 PM
And what a great feeling it is too Jenna, being at total peace with the world. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2023 6:34:00 AM
Have you ever just lie upon the ground and watch the clouds float overhead? That experience makes me feel the same way. Thanks, Tom.
Date: 1/9/2023 11:21:00 PM
Beautiful sets of senryus, Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2023 6:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jo.
Date: 1/9/2023 1:56:00 PM
Splendid trilogy, JL. I am there... ;o]
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, AP. Relax and stay awhile.
Date: 1/9/2023 1:07:00 PM
Jenna, beautiful, your poem made me serene, well done, Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. I'm glad it brought you a feeling of serenity.

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