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'Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it’  Jalaluddin Rumi

My Response To Rumi A composite man was this Rumi Mystic who penned ‘Spiritual Couplets’ thousands of magical lines of Persian poetry deep he lives on in simple (?) bites of three lines condensed confluent cracking proverbial nutshells soft in their core He’s buried in the Konya of Anatolian wisdom a place I am seeking to visit on my insider travels and have been compelled from into imagination and spirit of mind where the tree of life throws seeds on the shadows of tumbling body and soul ~~ Rumi lives on once we destroy what destroys us tear down the partitions ~~ ‘Healing by allowing to fall ill’ ‘searching for defenses within’ barriers fortresses imposing enclosures self built contraptions that prevent love kindness compassion Dysfunction and illness derive from inside thus we can either attempt to strive against mere symptoms and torturous outcrops bandage the hurt on the surface or take a good look at the messages crises fall together for a while reflect with serene mirrors of honesty reject the temptation futile attempts of aligning broken shards into yet another fragmentation sinking once more into darkness Rummaging rumination and running head on into the same walls again and again never achieved to manage my mangled madness into meaning and peace but acceptance and searching inside with the purpose of healing following three ~~ simple lines brought Rumi to life and myself back into light and true love~~ 27th November 2016 "If you desire healing,  let yourself fall ill  let yourself fall ill."  -  Jalaluddin Rumi

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Date: 12/28/2016 9:25:00 AM
Congrats Kai
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Date: 12/26/2016 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention with this nice poem. Well deserved.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2016 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Dane. I very much appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 12/26/2016 8:35:00 AM
Kai, your excellent write is both a tribute and a thought-provoking philosophical statement. Congrats! Janice
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2016 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Janice. Kind and healing wishes, Kai
Date: 12/26/2016 7:50:00 AM
Congrats, Kai, on your informative write!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2016 2:53:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Konya and Rumi are on my bucket list. One is closer than the other...
Date: 12/26/2016 1:59:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations, Kai :)
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Date: 12/26/2016 1:21:00 AM
Well done for your Honourable Mention in my contest, Kai.
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Julia Ward
Date: 12/26/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for entering, Kai, and best wishes.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/26/2016 1:42:00 AM
Thank you Julia. And thank your for taking the time and care in sponsoring another great contest. Many wishes to you, Kai
Date: 12/2/2016 12:25:00 AM
"Healing by allowing to fall ill" yes, exactly how I saw the quote, but I interpreted it very differently. I love this poem of yours. Allowing to love again by succumbing to be lovesick is wonderful too...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/26/2016 1:43:00 AM
Thank you Darren. The world is diverse and needs so much healing. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/27/2016 10:47:00 AM
Wonderful tribute. I'm going to reacquaint myself with his writing. I didn't know his homeland was Africa, but makes sense. We hope to visit South Africa in the next year.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/27/2016 10:57:00 AM
Hi there. See you in South Africa then maybe. No his homeland was in Anatolia I believe and he is buried there in Konya. but there is also so much wisdom here south of the Sahara. Lots of wishes, Kai
Date: 11/27/2016 5:19:00 AM
Wonderful homage to the greatest mystical poet to ever walk the earth. Namaste.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/27/2016 10:59:00 AM
Hi Phil. Namaste as well. Thank you for your kind comment. Many wishes, Kai

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